Satisfying chapter for all. ;-)

AWESOME! What a great ending. I also like it when author's show a little of the hospital scene - so many skip over it, and there are so many opportunities. You found them! Thanks for the great story!

Another powerful chapter. Well done. JUST what I wish the show had done. Can't wait to see Marissa fight for him.

Wow - very good. I watched every episode ever made of this show, and you have the voice, pace, and tone spot on.

What a treat is was to find this! I LOVED this show, and you wrote a wonderful story!

I liked this story, but of course if this was the actual show, in the next episode, Shannon would never again be mentioned, and I'd be wondering, "Whatever happened to him and that Shannon chick? And who's this new girl he won't know by the next episode?" LOL.

Good story. It was interesting.

Thanks for a great story. My only quibble was it should have been the respiratory therpist he was attracted to. ;-)

I do kind of wonder how Gary would appear to the other people in the bank at the end of this chapter. I mean, just how realistic would the dream be? hehe. ;-P

Awwww...poor Gary! Stay strong, Gar!

Great opening chapter! You know what I like. lol.