Reread this in the lockdown, brilliant ending ! :)

Cool writing

This was brilliant. Reading it after a long time again, in the lock down. :)

Why is Harry such a moron? Oh I just met this person let’s give them a hint about who I am while in disguise because that won’t go wrong

Sure we know she wouldn’t say anything but he doesn’t it cane across very forced

Bizarre ending. You navigated most of everything very well. I was a bit disturbed by Luna's sex drive at times.

I love the entire concept of this. It is so good!

Honestly, this chapter changed my view on this stories Luna. The epilogue establishes that she's a sociopathic, shallow person who can easily abandon her anchors. Seriously what in the goddamn hell is that epilogue. It feels like you wrote half of it, and some random who's into fucking random dudes for dick. I just don't like this story now that you added that fucking twist.

The story was great, then you did that with Scamander and Luna. It really surprised me, if Harry and Ginny are Luna's anchors, why would she abandon them for a smuggler with a big dick. I don't really know, but that ruined the experience for me. It just broke my immersion there. Your other stories are great, but this one was fine until the epilogue, which was ridiculous in its mockery of the established facts up to then. At first Luna would kill herself for them, now she's leaving because she wants dick. Honestly I wish I could erase the epilogue from my brain. Great story, but the epilogue pisses me off.

I thought Dobby never noticed the sock.

i wish you hadn't killed off Sirius. Sigh.

If I had to summerize this story in one word, it'd be... Brilliant.

I was wondering where Fleur ended up in.

I wonder if Hedwig and Fawkes will get along. There must be an interactions scene between them.

The cleansing is an interesting idea. But I feel like it should've come up sooner, during the training arc. If just a mention.

The spy movie subplot is very interesting.