I loved it. I wish you were still writing this lol

oh please keep thecstory up, I can't think of other things than how the next chapter will be...

omg I love this, it's so thrilling plz keep the great work up :)

I hope you haven't quit this story either. I'd like to know more about Tifa. I hope she can fix things with cloud even if they just got to know each other. They're sweet here.

Awesomenessssssssssssssssssss!

Hi IYHE. This is turning out fairly well. It's a good start. Just keep a couple things in mind though, like spelling. You keep using din't when it's didn't. Just keep in mind how things are spelled.

Also, it would help the reader more if you could increase the amount of imagery. It'll help to picture whst things look like.

Other than those things, this is turning out well. update soon

please update!

what's going to happen?

the other girls going to try to get CLoud?

what's up with Reno?

Update please :)

Hey, where's Chappie three?

been waiting for you a bit. Please update, this is very interesting and i like its pace.

very very quick but good all the same

This is fast yet steady... steady fast? i dunno...what i know is, this is what i couldnt do to one of my fics. good job! please update! I've been dying to read more CLoti fics since no one seems to be updating for now...keep up the good work!You made a good fic!

Interesting story

I can see that you changed the first one with a much more detailed one. well keep up the good work!

hope you'll update soon _

I liked your storyy..

keep it up...

cant wait till you update it soon.. D

What is with the random capitalization?