it is good so far the compass points are nouth:Company of Four Elements:short elements, east: Company of Winged Beasts: short high flyers, south Company of Reptiles and Sea Creatures: short sea snakes and last west:Company of Two and Four-legged Beasts: short twos and fours.

Noooo! *bawls* How could you end it like this? If you left it like this, it would be truly tragic- pleease consider writing more?

-Eim :)

*applauds* What an epic battle scene! The loose ends have all been tied up, and this in itself is a perfect ending to the story :) I'm so glad that he's reconciled with the Society, as well!

-Eim :)

This is one of my favorite chapters so far- it shows a completely different side to Kullervo. The imagery was fantastic, and it gave a very ethereal feel to the scene. You're a seriously talented writer.

-Eim :)

OH MY GOODNESS! I can honestly say that I wasn't expecting that! This is a brilliant story twist, but it's so ominous! I wouldn't have expected Shift to be the traitor, either!

-Eim :)

I'm starting to feel so sorry for him :( That explains a little, though, if Connie is comparing him to Kullervo, seeing as she's had such bad experiences with him! I'm extremely intrigued about the next chapter now, seeing as according to your PM, that's where a lot of the questions will be answered :D Off I go to read it!

-Eim :)

I'm finally getting a chance to sit back down and finish reading this :D Oh, poor Daniel- the Society is being very antagonistic towards him! I hope the conflict is resolved eventually :)

-Eim :)

this is Angelmail, but it wont let me submit another signed review for this chapter :D awwww, so sad! :'( but its good and really well written :) im gonna miss this story!

Angelmail x

I like both ideas; the epilogue and the sequel. Well mainly whichever you have a good plot or you have an idea to.

I'd like the sequel more because i can obviously read more! Though epilogues can be good depending on how they're written...

I'll keep my eyes open for an update.

Tx

yay yay yay yay yaaayy! pleeeeasee write one! i'll keep checking :P

awww, the end? :( sad it's over already, but great end :) and i like the last line, it lends itself very well to a sequel... maybe... hopefully? ;) :P

Angelmail x

oooh, i like how he likes the silver, cos its like his universal colour :D i like all the little things that all are important and add up, its really clever :)

Angelmail x

omg! i never expected that! i can't write more, cos i ahev to read on NOW xD

Angelmail x

woooh! now I get why he can go unnoticed, great idea :D and i like you portraying the society as the bad ones, for once :D

Angelmail x

Wow. I just checked back one minute to see if there were any new stories on CQ and you've already finished yours! You really write fast. I like the storyline and luv the description. The pace though a bit fast on Chapter 9 and 10. Hope you write more stories like this. They're brilliant and your styles amazing.

Tx