Reviews for Bella's Secret |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Was there a point to this? All drama, no solution, no answers. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Short and sweet. Loved it. 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful! i wish there was anther chapter though, this is great. . . |
![]() ![]() Sweet you go Bella and fuck duckweed he ain't nun |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading and that I am starting to love and like to read this story,so can you please write and update more chapters about it,thanks so much.£££%%%$$$&&&& |
![]() ![]() That was really cute and I have a feeling sooner or later they will end up being mates. :) |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I Like, I Lust, I Love!Please Update Soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() lovin this story please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, first of all, great story. Keep updating. I do have a few comments, however. Bella's story, I noticed, is scary similar to a book called "Crank" I am not saying this is a bad thing, or that you even knew it, or did it intentionally. I just wanted to let you know so that you might add a disclaimer in there for the book "Crank" by Ellen Hopkins. Also, you used the name "Zoey Brooke" which is very near the name of the leading lady in the Nickelodeon show "Zoey 101" Again, these are not problems, I just figured I'd point them out to you in case you hadn't noticed. You're an excellent writer and I would hate to think of you getting into trouble over something as silly as that :) I'm putting the story on alert and I hope to recieve an email telling me you have updated! |
![]() ![]() ![]() THE ? I HAVE BEEN PONDERING IS DID EDDIE KNOW SHE WAS RAPED AND HOW LONG HAS A AND E KNOWN. WAS IT DUE TO A VISION OF HER TELLING J OR DID HE FIND OUT WHILE THEY DATED. LOVE THE FACT THAT JAKE AND N, R AND EM AND J SUPPORTED HER. IN THIS STORY IS A AND J MARRIED OR NOT? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Stupid Prick. i hope fuckward burns in hell! i cant wait for Nessi and Zoey to meet! Eeeeee! cant wait for the next chapter! please update SOON! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! i LOVE the story! i can NOT wait to see what happens next! i wonder whats going to happen to Zoe AND Renesmee! i also can NOT believe that Carlisle and ESME! could act like that! please please please keep wriing and write more soon! XOXOXOXOXOXOXO |
![]() ![]() ![]() awe man she only ripped his arm off...damn i was hopin for more. oh well post again soon...maybe my wish will be granted. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wish rose emmett renesme and jake had decided to go with jasper and bella also. all 4 of the bitch cullens need to be left behind. :) |