Reviews for Bella's Secret
WhiskeyStraight chapter 4 . 4/24
Was there a point to this?
All drama, no solution, no answers.
MISS JXHNSXN chapter 4 . 2/22/2016
Short and sweet. Loved it. 3
sugarcane.behind.the.sea chapter 4 . 9/21/2015
Wonderful! i wish there was anther chapter though, this is great. . .
Guest chapter 4 . 6/25/2015
Sweet you go Bella and fuck duckweed he ain't nun
andjelija.nenic chapter 4 . 6/25/2015
Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading and that I am starting to love and like to read this story,so can you please write and update more chapters about it,thanks so much.£££%%%$$$&&&&
Guest chapter 4 . 2/24/2015
That was really cute and I have a feeling sooner or later they will end up being mates. :)
January chapter 4 . 10/11/2012
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Regin chapter 4 . 8/15/2012
I Like, I Lust, I Love!Please Update Soon!
sportytc chapter 4 . 4/26/2012
lovin this story please update soon
Miss-evil-lil-elf chapter 4 . 10/22/2011
Well, first of all, great story. Keep updating.

I do have a few comments, however.

Bella's story, I noticed, is scary similar to a book called "Crank" I am not saying this is a bad thing, or that you even knew it, or did it intentionally. I just wanted to let you know so that you might add a disclaimer in there for the book "Crank" by Ellen Hopkins.

Also, you used the name "Zoey Brooke" which is very near the name of the leading lady in the Nickelodeon show "Zoey 101"

Again, these are not problems, I just figured I'd point them out to you in case you hadn't noticed. You're an excellent writer and I would hate to think of you getting into trouble over something as silly as that :) I'm putting the story on alert and I hope to recieve an email telling me you have updated!
deltagrl chapter 4 . 7/24/2011
THE ? I HAVE BEEN PONDERING IS DID EDDIE KNOW SHE WAS RAPED AND HOW LONG HAS A AND E KNOWN. WAS IT DUE TO A VISION OF HER TELLING J OR DID HE FIND OUT WHILE THEY DATED. LOVE THE FACT THAT JAKE AND N, R AND EM AND J SUPPORTED HER. IN THIS STORY IS A AND J MARRIED OR NOT?
SexyVampyre chapter 4 . 5/17/2011
Stupid Prick. i hope fuckward burns in hell! i cant wait for Nessi and Zoey to meet! Eeeeee! cant wait for the next chapter! please update SOON!
TwilightFan888 chapter 4 . 4/25/2011
OMG! i LOVE the story! i can NOT wait to see what happens next! i wonder whats going to happen to Zoe AND Renesmee! i also can NOT believe that Carlisle and ESME! could act like that! please please please keep wriing and write more soon!

XOXOXOXOXOXOXO
T1nk3rB1tch chapter 4 . 4/24/2011
awe man she only ripped his arm off...damn i was hopin for more. oh well post again soon...maybe my wish will be granted.
traceybuie chapter 4 . 4/24/2011
I wish rose emmett renesme and jake had decided to go with jasper and bella also. all 4 of the bitch cullens need to be left behind. :)
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