O I was so excited to see that you re-posted . . . and then I was greeted with the sight of this (

lol though I can't get too made because I just did the same thing on my story. I understand what you mean about feeling like your writing has gotten better and not being satisfied with your story. Once I read Sense and Flexibility too I just couldn't look at my own previous chapters the same.

Look forward to you continuing this though, it was my favorite of your stories.

And just to let you know I always though your work was great, I always told you how jealous I was of your skill )

FINALLY! :D

I really hope that you update this story. I absolutely love it!

This has to be one of my favorite Shepard and Thane! You have done them justice, they are so well written. I also adore Odds and Ends! Thank You!

This has been excellent, Matyrfae. I just knew that Jack had a softer side. I'm loving your depiction of Kolyat, and I can't wait to see how his and Evlin's relationship turns out.

Evlin is a wonderful character, so soulful. It made me sob when she was taken and when Kolyat found her.

It's great work, very immersive. I couldn't even go to sleep until I stopped reading this at 5AM this morning. :)

So glad to see Evie and you back here again!

Mornings with Matyrfae updates always make my day. :)

This was awesome as always, loved Jack's part in it. Hope to see the story keep flowing. /crosses fingers

Great read, I anm still loveing this... Keep it up I cannot wait for more.

P.S. Glad to have you back.

*Cheers* Yay! You're back! I'd missed this story so much, it's still on my favorites list.

OMG I am so happy you are back! I was worried about you! But you're back and updateing one of my mostest favorite stories. Your characters are so vivid and emotions so spot on. So happy Evlin is working through her personnal hell and that Kolyat is there for her. And that Shepard is always there for those she loves.

Glad your muse is back. Looking forward to hearing more from you.

Are you excited about ME3? Demo comes out Valentines Day! I can't wait!

Yea! Love this story, so please keep it coming! :-)

Mana from heaven :)

x_x lovely chapter, especially jack's talk. this was one of my favorite fics and i never thought i'd hear from it again. PRAISE THE MAKER

No, no no no no, no. You can't leave us with this. There has to be more. Please? :'( - PJ

You can't just leave us with this, I mean I am sitting hear crying because I get so involved with your story. Please write again soon.

With Love,

Lassemista

This was very exciting reading. You managed to get me laugh and cry trough the chapters. As far as I see it, it is very well thought up. I just love the "family" dynamic between Krioses and Shepards (counting Evie logicaly). I am slightly confused by the girls age... Shepard treats her as a little girl while Kolyat obviously treats her as a woman. I am guessing that she would be somewhere between 16 to 20 years old tho? But it doesnt matter realy.

This is seriously amazing story and it would be such a shame if you wouldnt continue it... please do. I will be eagrly awaiting that time.