Reviews for Underwater Smoke
Owlet49 chapter 1 . 5/2/2017
Nawwwwwwwww! KAWAII
countrylovinfangirl chapter 1 . 9/6/2014
more please! I love it!
theabridgedkuriboh chapter 1 . 10/14/2013
SQUEEEE SO CUTE. I LOVE GIL HE'S SO CUTE.
ComputerIdiot chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
Awwwwwwww I like it :)
Yukinachan72 chapter 1 . 3/29/2012
Awwww~! I love this story so much! It's just so cute! You are a really good writer, thank you for typing this~! Great Job~~! o(_)o
xoxInnerHollowxox chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
Awwwww this was so cute!

Loved it! :D
crazyvegimab chapter 1 . 12/4/2010
I am madly in love with how you write Gil.
Kalana Fox chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
OMG WHY IS THIS SO CUTE?

I...I can has sequel? *hopeful eyes*
Smart Angel chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
That was so sweet! So cute! I loved it! They were so in character, it was perfect! Now Gil has a reason to stop smoking. XD
Niborkcalb chapter 1 . 11/19/2010
AAAAAAAAaaawwww~~~ *fav'd*
TotalAlias chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
YOU. HAVE. TALENT.

Both your writing and your story in general were so gorgeous. Almost like MochiJun status, right here.

This goes beyond adding to my favorites, because it's ACTUALLY one of my favorites... does that make sense? My all-time favorite Ozbert fics. I used to have one, now I have two :D
YakuKikyo chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
You really have a great style, it was well-written and I loved each sentences of it. Hope to see more from you.