| Reviews for The Ocean's Son |
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   Callum Runchman chapter 20 . 9/13 Love it. Sweet and happy story with not too much drama and for once didn't have percy being an overpowered saviour that singlehandedly wins the battle. I'm glad being "the Ocean's Son" didn't give him tones of power and make him into a undefeatable weapon etc. I'm surprised that him and Annabeth didn't receive immortality in the end. It would have been fitting to see them as the new royal members of Atlantis to replace Amphitrite and Triton. I also feel we should have gotten to see Hera punished for her crime of direct interference and forced memory altering of not only a demigod but the saviour of Olympus. Even Zeus, as arrogant as he is, would have found this as a crime that deserved punishment. |
| desolationflower chapter 1 . 4/21 not worth reading due to many ooc times that would never happen |
| guest chapter 1 . 2/29 you are one of my favorite authors! keep up the great work! |
| Guest chapter 3 . 3/26/2019 And I’m done. This story is stupid and not worth going furthur. The basis for this story is complete shit and unbelievable. Utter garbage. Delete this shit and try again but without making your characters completely ooc. Dumbass |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/26/2019 I will give this one more chapter but I feel the entire premise of the story is built on a foundation that can’t exist. Percy could not have betrayed Annabeth. As in not possible for him too so your story is already faulty. Already 5/10 let’s hope you have a valid reason. If not, the story is garbage and not worth reading. |
| TraceurHao chapter 20 . 5/16/2017 dorian is the 2nd mode of the major scale too |
| Guest chapter 20 . 3/26/2017 OMG SOOOO PERFECT LOVE STORY AWESOME AGAIN BEST STORY AGAIN ONE OF THE BEST YESSSSS YOU R AWESOME! |
| Guest chapter 20 . 3/14/2017 awwwwww so good |
| Guest chapter 20 . 2/16/2016 pothena again? i'm glad went to read the last chapter before wasting my time. |
| Wacky Jackie chapter 20 . 7/13/2015 Oh my G-O-S-H this is a great story good job love it love it love wacky Jackie signing off |
| Guest chapter 20 . 3/10/2015 Ive never seen a story as good! This is oretty much better than Anaklusmos14s story! |
| bring the money chapter 1 . 11/26/2014 This is so stupid...Percy's fatal flaw is loyalty! He wouldn't have broken Annabeth's heart. More like the other way around. |
| Charlee56 chapter 20 . 10/1/2014 One of THE best stories I have yet read on this website. And a fitting end as well as a new beginning for Wise Girl and Seaweed Brain, as well as Thalia Grace and all parents concerned. And a new beginning for them all in the new Atlantis! |
| Charlee56 chapter 6 . 9/30/2014 Wrong Spelling How Used Correct Spelling Imbedded "The object was imbedded" Embedded Peaked "Have I peaked your interest" Piqued Rapped "He rapped his arm around Percy" Wrapped Homonyms are the toughest words to learn for demigods. Your ADHD almost always prevents you learning the correct spelling, grammar and syntax of many words. But don't worry! Just use the Mist and everyone will walk away convinced that you're a bloody genius! Either that, or learn to spel rite. |
| Zarcasm chapter 7 . 7/21/2014 I don't really like the way they got together since having... ahem... before getting married is gross. I like your story, though. |
