Nice job.

This. Was. Amazing.
I'd use more words to describe how much I loved this story but there's no use. But it was a beautiful story with the right amount of suspense, romance, humour, and action, everything that made this a wonderful read.

I have finally figured out what about your writing is bugging me, it feels like a play with all the actor's overacting.

Awww! I loved the end!

This is such a curious plot! Eating sand? A Roman ambassador? I can not wait to read on!

A beautiful wedding! Now please don't say that, after time "stood still," it started going backwards again.

When you first introduced a new character, I was a little worried, but you incorporated her so well, I can not wait to read what happens next!

Well, that answers that question of writing from Dastan's point of you. Hurray! Oh god, and haven't we all had those morning. XD

You write the characters incredibly. Will you be writing from Dastan's point of view as well? Also, another two questions. One, will their old friends the knife-thrower and the ostrich races return? And might you also write a story about Tamina's immediate reaction to the truth that Dastan tells her after your previous story. As I said, you write them amazingly.

Yay exactly how it should have ended I was thinking the child of Tamina and Dastan should be friends with the Persian heir :) This is a really good story and I enjoyed reading it :)

weird, the gods whispered to Dastan to make love to Tamina and now she already knows she's pregnant? I love this story and can't wait for the epilogue ( I hope Parisa has given birth to a son :))

So now we know some more about kosh and astera is his sister! We shouldn't be surprised :) I loved this chapter

Hmm I know they mentioned Kosh in the movie but who is he and what is his goal? I'd like to figure that out, soon :)

Aww, I can't believe I missed out the end! First off, congratulations for finishing this story! I especially enjoyed the epilogue, it did tie things up. And far more realisitic with Garsiv's future. I suppose things can't change, and still haven't, but oh well.

The names you came up with for the children are very interesting, did you check out a website? Either way, a good fic, this one, which belongs here in with the best of the fandom. I loved every bit of it. Its nice to see how you inserted real historical figures and such into a largley fantastical story, and the end was realisitic.

Thanks for this story, I enjoyed every bit of it, and hope you write more, whether its fanfiction or not.

Yay! I love Amar, I laughed out loud when he was screaming at the ostriche racing ;D