| Reviews for Dangerous Obsession |
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   solidae26 chapter 5 . 5/25 Why isn't Mike paying child support?! What kind of idiot talks to the father of her baby for HOURS and never mentions the baby!? |
| Guest chapter 16 . 6/9/2017 and then "my most lethal vampire instincts kicked in" Why in the fuck would he say it like that...? So fucking weird! You didn't think it would be better to simply say "my instincts kicked in?" Doesn't that sound better? especially since its in HIS FUCKING POV? |
| jk chapter 15 . 6/9/2017 its really convenient for your story that every time bella gets away from Edward something happens so she needs his help...every fucking time...Mike going all crazy out of nowhere isn't really believable on several fronts. First, hes been pretty normal this whole time, a douche yes, but normal just the same. He left bella for someone better looking...yet now hes all obsessed with her? wouldn't he just stalk Katie? its weird... |
| jk chapter 13 . 6/9/2017 let me guess...bella is pregnant so you thought you had to show that by making her have drastic unrealistic mood swings? |
| jk chapter 11 . 6/9/2017 bella sure does drink a lot for a mother...well she also doesn't do very much mothering does she? |
| Guest chapter 10 . 6/9/2017 How does one move AND relocate? aren't they the same things? How many women has Edward been with? Edward said that esme was thinking of Tanya...and a few "aquantinces"...? why make Edward so arrogant? its not attractive he was 23 when he was turned? was he married? they married young in the early 1900's |
| jk chapter 9 . 6/9/2017 Do you find it strange that Edward smoke cigars all day? kinda nasty...also why in the fuck would Edward know people at a restaurant? are these vampires like the ones from vampire diaries? |
| jk chapter 8 . 6/9/2017 what exactly is a kept trophy wife girlfriend? shouldn't it just be kept girlfriend? why all the stupid shit? |
| jk chapter 7 . 6/9/2017 I see you fit bella into the normal stripper mold that everyone uses; insecure, good person at heart, child at an early age, piece of shit ex boyfriend, pathetic, poor, needy, despearate for attention...etc Bella is a stripper...with that comes a certain level of self esteem...yet you have her all like...oh no one has ever called me beautiful before! ya sureeeeeeeeeeeee |
| jk chapter 4 . 6/9/2017 bella got so drunk she actually passed out from 2 drinks? bella all of a sudden doesn't feel well so Edward throws her over his shoulder? Does he know NOTHING about humans? you don't put pressure on their stomachs when they have been drinking! Bella has a child...but shes not responsible enough to have one obviously. Getting so drunk she passes out, stripping for money, dating her customers...etc...maybe Mike should have custody since bella is still a fucking idiot. |
| jk chapter 3 . 6/9/2017 Shes no fucking stupid that she left to go home in her stripper outfit? let me guess...she gets accosted by some men on the way home because she looks like a nasty fucking whore |
| jk chapter 2 . 6/9/2017 WOW...that's why he fucks a woman? cause she annoys the shit out of him so he just "give in"? He makes it sound like he has zero interest in Tanya...yet he mentions the "great sex"...but lets be honest here...Tanya was a whore in her human life...and shes been a whore her entire after life...how great is loose used up pussy? Plus Edwards a mind reader...so he knows JUST how many men "came" before him...doesn't that gross him the fuck out? I just don't see a mind reader being with someone like that. Plus did you actually see Tanya in twilight? Goddamn that bitch was ugly...like...whered her neck go? why is her head so big? eyes too far apart, thin lips, frizzy hair, too blond, saggy boobs...sorry to pick her apart but shes really fucking ugly. The ugliest of the three sisters. |
| jk chapter 1 . 6/9/2017 Sooo lets talk about the obvious here. First...why would anyone want a creep that hangs out in a strip club? Second...why would anyone be attracted to a guy that smirks cockily? Ego is SOOOO not a turn on. Third and I think the most obvious...the customers are NOT supposed to touch the strippers, it was inappropriate of Bella to allow it! I don't care how "hot" the guy is, its not allowed. Bella should be fired. Just saying. |
| He he he chapter 17 . 5/9/2017 You are one fucked up writer. You should have warned us that you don't write HEAs. Thank god you didn't finish the sequel. |
| TrueSkye chapter 4 . 9/18/2016 Awww man, I want a hot, sugar-daddy vamp too! *foot stomp* *brandishes pouty lip* |
