This is brilliance. You've captured Ziva so perfectly, I can't even stand it. I want to see those missteps on the show. PLEASE! Call up dem writers right now and tell dem about it. GAH LOVE!

Ohhh. I hope Gibbs doesn't find out haha. This is so Tony and Ziva. It's in a (somewhat) lighter tone than the first chapter, but I still love it. It put chills in me.

Good fic. I liked the Gibbs sixth sense discussion

Great fic! Love the flirtation and hurt!Tony. Nice work! :)

LOL loved the last couple of lines.

I'm happy you decided to update; this was nice. Thanks for writing.

-Zay

Hey this was cool, I quite liked the ending thanks for the update. A

Hehe. A very nice ending to a pleasingly well-written story. Loved the progression and both coming to realize what they mean to each other. Sighh. I shall go to sleep happy :)

*HUGS*

I LOVE myself some good 'injured, stuck-in-a-life-threatening-situation Tony and Ziva' angst, watching them navigate dangerous waters as either person worries over the other. Like when Tony refuses to keep his eyes closed because that means he can't see Ziva, or when Ziva made Tony drink the last of the water, or when they were arguing over the other's condition. Seriously, I freaking adore this couple and their tenacity! Sort of wishing this were longer, an actual story maybe, but it works well as a one shot so I'll try not to be selfish! VERY well done and I hope to read more from you!

~AngelMoon Girl

The fragmentation - and realistic dialogue - work really nicely together and I definitely enjoyed this very much. Brief and lovely and just what I needed right now.

Thanks for writing.

-Zay

Awwwwww, that's adorable!

Wow, great story! :)

I like the fragmented aspect of the story; I think it somehow makes the story flow better than if it hadn't been fragmented. Don't know if that makes sense lol, but that's how it seems.

I think it really sounds like them, too. You can picture it happening on NCIS. And I love that Ziva is 'just checking' lol.

Great work! :)

I think that the fragmented aspect of this story fits perfectly with the scene. I really liked this. Very well done!

Wonderful. Thank you for sharing this.

Awesome job !