love it so much

Fun story. :)

You know, when I was in college, I was taking too many classes and had to choose between my art classes and music classes. I chose art. I felt kind of like Yuzu did there: free. :)

And you did this without swearing once. 3 THANK YOU!

That part about signing a petition...BEST SCENE EVER! LMHO! Kudos

Uh, that was interesting~

*snicker* I LOVE what you did with Yuzu-chan~... A mini-Unohana in the making~!
On the other hand, great fic~! I was genuinely hooked the whole way, and threw a mental fit when my "get-your-butt-moving-outside-so-you-can-get-to-school" alarm rang RIGHT AS I got to this chapter~!
~Kura

That was a lot more fun than I was expecting

Beautiful

...and now you have my attention

Great story loved it. Am new to the bleachverse and am glad you left it even though are unhappy with the first chapters.

Thank you for actually finishing the story because most people just don't finish. I'm glad you saw progress in your writing from before high school until after high school. It's been many years, but I hope you're doing well.
:)
-AngelofDarkus

That was a grate story. I know how Tatsuki turned a hollow base from your story ( well on my own way of seeing things ): Mayuri have his stupid invention affect her and it turned her into a hollow something.

Wow. I read this brilliant story over the course of three days, and a huge pat on the back for actually finishing it eventhough there were big gaps in between, it would have been a crying shame if your story had gone into the unfinished pile.

Let's see - what did I like about this story? Too much to name really but most of all, characterisation was really done masterfully. The characters felt very fresh yet true to their canon selves; I loved how natural Toshiro's feelings for Karin developed over time, not overly sappy or cliched love at first sight at all. I also particularly enjoyed your writing of Matsumoto and Ichigo - both done wonderfully in character as well.

Props for also having a substantial plot and tying your story in with events in the manga; an interesting concept having Karin be a member of the Vizard. I love that you involved familiar faces such as Kyoraku and Ukitake, and used them as comic relief especially in moments where the atmosphere was getting rather tense and heavy.

To be honest , I disliked the epilogue where Yuzu quit school and became a Shinigami because I just think that Yuzu is the normal one in the family and deserves to lead a purely human life. Also not a fan of Renji/Tatsuki (I ship RenRuki) but this is really nitpicking.

I had such an amazing time reading this story. No regrets even though I have finals to study for. You had me flailing around with all the feels this story gave me. Great job!

i enjoyed reading this!

They only played a game of soccer.