Awww! I haven't read this series in ages, but that is such a cute friendship!

AW Tom! He's such a good friend, honestly.
I haven't read the series in AGES but I loved the books so much XD

awww the part with tom was soooo cute!

The last line was awesome. In fact, the entire thing was a great reflection of heroism. Good job.

loved it, bust mostly the last line involving Tom...awwww so cute and nice (the Tom part that is) keep it up:)

The last sentence made my day. I just wanted you to know that.

This was really good. But one thing kind of disturbed me. So just one tip is that next time before you publish something is that you use the search tool to search on your story title. Because one thing that tends to annoy me is when you find several stories with the same title. Because that was one thing that made it hard for me to concentrate on the story. Because I published a story maybe a couple weeks ago with the same title. I know I sound like a whiny little kid but the first step to make a story stand out is that you make the first appearance different. I don't really care that you use the same title as me but other people might. I know it's really hard to make a title original but at least try not to have the same title as somebody else in the same category. Okay now I have been picky enough for a whole year but otherwise I can't find any faults. Good language and nice twist on the end. I can't find any fault in the grammar either but my English aren't that good. All in all nice work.

Wow. That was really deep. That was a fantastic story. Wonderful job. I will look forward to anything you write in the future.

brilliant, totally loved alex's self-reflection on how he had changed; it was very in character. that last line with tom was kind of the cherry on top. great work )

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Nice! I like what Tom wrote.