like... the Sebastian Stan movie the Covenant?

Masterfully done. I absolutely loved it :)

Poor Austin.

Sam was lucky, but I don't know how he wasn't addicted, or Austin, for that matter, if they were given so much heroin.

Anyways, Thanks

Man, I never saw John cracking like that!

You did a very great job!

I wish I could write like you!

YES! Thank you, wonderful lady!

That was a really good story. I loved how you built the tension, and how even though what happens to Sam is awful you manage to write in a way that wasn't too graphic or horrible. John was a character that i enjoyed reading too, he isn't easy to write at all so good job on that XD. I have to say that the "Daddy, i've missed you", was beautiful and heartbreaking, i could almost see a little Sammy asking for his dad, so thank you for that. If i can maybe just make a little criticism? the ending felt a little bit rush, and i kinda wanting more of everyone's feelings. But anyway that was still really well written, i can tell that you put a lot of effort there, trying to get everything right. Again thank you.

Yay they saved sam! Im so happy that Austin isn't dead too. For a few chapters I thought that he was.

Wow, youre a truly wonderful writer. I rarely come across a story that sparks so much emotion it brings me to tears.
i mean that honestly, i'd say the only other story i've ever cried in was the lovely bones. So just keep in mind that your writing drew the same level of emotion that one from a professional, world renowned writer did.
Congratulations, its always wonderful to find something so amazing and original on these sites. thankyou for a wonderful read! :)

Wow wow I really love this story! And I really love Austin!)) he was like a big brother for sam!))

Fantastic story! Poor Sammy!:( but it was awesome!

I'm sorry I'm not a fan of John. I don't really like him in the story's or the show but I really feel like he won't cry. I don't want to be mean or anything but John isn't a very loving person he's a hard ass. And this story really didn't show it. But I did love the story don't get me wrong. I cried so much it's not even funny.

OMG! When John shot Nick between the eyes!...SWEET! The bastard SO had it coming!... :O)

Awesome, simply amazing story. I seriously read it all in one go; I couldn't stop clicking the next button! c:

I'm really glad with what you did with Nick and co, but poor Austin D: It's logical, so I can't complain much, but damn D: Poor kid /3

You really are an amazing writer, so don't you dare stop! :D

Well shoot I'm mad at you right now. This story was so good I went to bed really late because I could not put this story down I wanted to see how it ended. But since I get up at the butt crack of dawn. I only read the first 15 chapters. But I added it to my kindle and finished reading it at work. I'm a newbie to fan fic. I only read and review so I'm trying to find the authors I like and add them to my list. So thank you for taking the time to write this interesting story. BTW I added Mind eye's to my Kindle. But I may have to start that one tomorrow. Because I need so

Oh my gosh this was a beautiful stories. This makes number three of your stories that I have. You do an amazing job and I can't wait for more of your stories.