So after reviewing this I have decided to give it a 6/10
You would need a story where it's not just short, slow it down.

Gimme part two,
i'm happy i typed vore and actually got results!
keep it up, HATERS GONNA HATE!

I liked it. _

I liked the idea of this story. It wasn't violent or gory, and it was consensual. There were a few grammatical mistakes, but it was short, sweet and to the point. Good job _