Reviews for Keep Your Enemies Closer |
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OUATLovr chapter 28 . 8/20 I read this whole thing in about a day - I just couldn’t put it down. I love the way you’ve written all of the characters here, they all feel so real, and I love the route you’ve gone with Voldemort winning but leaving Harry alive after finding out he’s a horcrux. Hope you continue soon! |
Nice Egan chapter 28 . 6/14 Oh, such a good story. Very refreshing! Please continue. Update soon, please! |
Guest chapter 28 . 5/7 I read this some months ago and came back to read my favorite parts. I don’t know why this story has so few reviews! *looks at self who hadn’t reviewed it yet* I really like the suspense here. It seems you really don’t like Snape for some reason! Neville’s character is well-portrayed as coming into his own strength. Yes! I really hope you don’t let Voldemort do anything (more) awful to Watanabe. He’s like a reluctant father figure, if a bit aloof, to Harry, who doesn’t really have one, poor guy. Helpful criticism-if I may?-I could really do without the sweats. Yes, I’m an adult, but I cringe to read f-bombs in an otherwise fascinating story. Believe me, your writing is quite good enough without. ;) That being said, please update soon! I know you haven’t for over a year, but I noticed in your notes you were just editing two months ago. That gives me hope that this won’t be left as a WIP! *waits* ~Quackers |
GreggoGeek22 chapter 28 . 3/22 I love the character dynamic! Awesome job, can’t wait for the next update! |
cairovault7 chapter 28 . 3/19 This is a rare bit of fiction that handles relationships with such delightful complexity. I simply cannot not wait for an update, probably will kept checking in for another decade. It's been a decade! And this fiction is lovely proof of your contribution to the HP fandom. |
PinkMusicalCherry chapter 8 . 3/8 you write the venom effects/haze SOOOOOO well |
PinkMusicalCherry chapter 1 . 3/6 your dedication ugh. The greatest of greats. |
Laurnn6 chapter 28 . 2/23 This story is so good I could cry. I have never found another hp fanfic like it. I hope you update someday |
Guest chapter 28 . 12/16/2019 Where is the rest of this? I love the dynamic that you have here. You have Harry slowing sliding toward the dark, but resisting. It seems to be a constant push and pull for his loyalties. This is truly great. I love that you are making edits even ten years later. Even if you don’t end this story, it is phenomenal. Thanks for creating this. |
IsabelleRainBlack chapter 28 . 12/14/2019 What a cliff hanger to end on. Need more chapters please! |
FlashDragon chapter 28 . 10/16/2019 Started reading two days ago and was instantly captivated. Can't wait to read more! |
WesternReader chapter 28 . 9/4/2019 That is something. |
Hotbutteredcorn chapter 25 . 8/25/2019 I want to hear, just once, Harry tell Snape to go fuck himself. "Watch that tounge of yours, Me. Potter" " go fuck yourself, Professor" |
lalalamb chapter 1 . 8/8/2019 i like reading harry and voldemort when done well it's very complicated and freaking addicting. hmm... voldem seem to be the asexual type tbh |
ocane-greenleaf chapter 28 . 6/18/2019 wow! your writting improve so much since the begining! it's the second time I read your story and I really like it, I like the relation beween Harry and Voldemort, the power dynamic. I really hope you will continu this story! |