Reviews for Pass The Fist
guardianofdragonlore chapter 4 . 6/3/2015
Pacifist America is an interesting plot! I wish you luck on your novel, they are true pains when their not fan fictions!
ShadowWolfDemon19 chapter 4 . 3/3/2015
Good luck on getting your original novel published :3
milesae19 chapter 4 . 1/29/2015
Good Luck on your novel!
Guest chapter 4 . 1/27/2015
I really loved this fanfiction ;-;
CheshireKitKat chapter 4 . 1/27/2015
aww.. well then I hope you get soon so that you can return to your fan fictions. I love this story!
Jay Rowan chapter 3 . 4/23/2014
Wait, why haven't you updated? This awesome story and you haven't finished it! I wanna see where this relationship gets them!
Jay Rowan chapter 2 . 4/23/2014
Well, as for this awesome story, it has a good start. Sadly there's jut not enough Germany/America. Also, Prussia's last name is Beilschmidt, its Ludwig who has no known last name, but most of the fandom gives him Prussia's last name 'cause they're brothers.
CheshireKitKat chapter 3 . 4/3/2014
Continue this!
CheshireKitKat chapter 2 . 4/3/2014
Gilbert and Ludwig have the same last name. They are brothers.
Guest chapter 3 . 9/1/2013
Omg I love love this story so much it's so hard to find a good americaxgermany story next chapter soon plz XD
Criminal Minds only mafia boss chapter 3 . 8/15/2013
morrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
A-Non-Mouse chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
-is speechless from awe- ... -slow clap-
Lithuania12393 chapter 3 . 6/12/2013
You have to continue, I can't wait anymore
BrownFeather chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
Hi!

How was it? :D
Hmm... At first, I didn't get where this would be going. I'm not certain yet, but it sounds interesting.
Alfred having a parallel life in a hospital is a very nice idea, and in your story, Alfred is very charming. Maybe a bit too bright and happy all the time, but that's just him, and you can see immediately, why someone - like Germany - could fall for him. Also, the dialogues and the patients their stories and personalities were very varied and rally nice to read.

I just saw that your last update was in 2011... is there a chance that you might continue the story? :)
9foxgrl chapter 3 . 9/22/2012
such a cute story
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