Reviews for Arthur did you just fall? |
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Missingwings chapter 1 . 3/21/2015 I read the whole A.N! This was hilarious and wonderful! The puns and jokes were perfect... And Francis was a jewel. Incredible job! (Kiku was great too.) |
HaniaDoma chapter 1 . 8/13/2014 THAT WAS SO CUTE I NEED TO REREAD IT OVER AND OVER *favorites story* |
Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 8/13/2014 No No No! You should have make the last one! Omake of Alfred walk to sleeping Arthur beside Francis! He would be sooo possessive! Dx - "My abs has increased!" LOL *face palmed together with Kiku* |
CamerAnon chapter 1 . 8/8/2014 How cute! |
0000000ooooo0 chapter 1 . 8/8/2014 Love it! |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/7/2014 I wouldn't have minded another omake! This was wonderful! |
Fireball Massacre chapter 1 . 8/7/2014 Its funny and amusing. |
Mapple Syrup chapter 1 . 8/7/2014 I loved it! It made me laugh a lot xd Why didn't you continued with Omake 6? I wanted to know what happened when Alfred saw them! fghfdk Anyway, I think that it was perfect, long as it was xd, and it wouldn't be the same without all that stories after the original fic! I also liked your writting! |
psycho-otaku chapter 1 . 6/3/2014 This was great and my favorite part was Arthur's excuse for falling. It was really funny and you did a pretty good job with spelling and grammar for English not being your first language. Everything else was 'awesome' as Prussia would say. If you get better at spelling, your writing will be flawless. ;) |
GhostWishper chapter 1 . 11/16/2013 Loved the story. And the Omakes. Especially the last one, Hetalia wouldn't be the same if France and UK weren't best-frenemies, all USUK fangirls should accept that. |
MayBell Lyric chapter 1 . 8/6/2013 Usually I would ignore the misspellings, but this fic has so many of them that it's actually distracting. There were also a lot of words that were misspelled the same way more than once (such as British, tongue, and talented to name a few) which leads me to believe that you do not know how to spell these words. I think you need a beta. |
nikkicchi chapter 1 . 5/29/2013 Goddamn. I love this, seriously. Especially the omakes (yes, seriously). And the pick up lines omg. A usuk story without best friends (pervert) France and (fanboy) kiku isn't complete. And gakuen au will always be on my top 10 head canons, especially dork!usuk. Gaah. -mentally gushing over this oneshot- |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/24/2013 XD you like omakes more,huh make those into chapters and more please / |
hetalialoverusuk chapter 1 . 10/12/2012 "Arthur... did you just fall?" "No,I attacked the floor." "...Backwards?" "Yes, I am freaking tallented." Read that and died. I did that same exact thing word for word this morning with my friend, word for word. Then we started cracking up. I LOVE YOU! |
emmie333 chapter 1 . 3/20/2012 I loved the story...and all the Omakes too! It would have felt incomplete without them, well, not really but they add funny plot-circles and things...I ramble just as much as you do appearently! |