OMG, I LOVED THIS XD

Still lovin' it D

i love this :)

I loved this story! Nerf guns do make a funny little story.

HAHAHAHAHA. I love it. Its really cute. :"""

Ahahahaaa! THAT'S AWESOME! OMG LOL XD I JUST ROFL'd!

kyaa! so cute! lol! 3 fairytales!

Ahhh! This one-shot was brilliant!

I was laughing my arse off the entire way through!

I loved how Yuri was cursing fairy tales, the Nerf war with the foam swords, and Greta getting her way in making the two of them kiss

...did she cook this up with Wolfram? XD

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Nya~~~

Not bad but i think you need to work on thier characters a little more. Some parts can be more thoroughly explained and discribed (surroundings, thoughts, feelings, conversation etc)

But on the whole the story was great and I would love it if you wrote a sequal with the water guns - Me loooooves water-play X3

Your truly,

Miss C

Nice! Love it :)

I did! THis was awesome! I can't wait for another story :D

WOW~! This story is TOTALLY AWESOME! I LOVED IT! I mean,I like our so called 'world war III'! ITS FUN! LOL Just wanted to tell you that this story REALLY is nice! .

This story is very simple, yet truly enjoyable and totally sweet! D

I LOVE IT!

I really like the touch of the warm family atmosphere here. it's really heart-warming~

Oh, and I just love a the adorable moments of Yuuram you created. All that lacks in is only the descriptions to express each of the characters' feelings and both their reactions in general.

All in all, it was very enjoyable. 3

Write more~!

Oh god.. I died from the cuteness! Kyaaaa~ Write more like this please?

I love this story. The relationship between Yuuri, Wolfram, and Greta is something I love but rarely see in KKM fanfic-so much of it concentrates on Y/M that they forget about their daughter! The whole playtime thing was both unusual and imaginative. Having Yuuri go home for his old toys and bringing them back for his own daughter to enjoy was particularly touching.

As for constructive critique, the story was top-heavy with dialogue and light in active description, but even so I never lost track of who said what. As a whole, a nicely put together and believable story. Well done. I hope to read more from you soon.