The was totally foreshadowing I mean
Harry will not having a fighting chance in hell(maybe a bit wrong but realistic at this point in time to think) it would take him living in a tent looking for mystical objects (done)

If I were Ron Harry and Hermione I would have made a case like Newt Scamanders creature case that way they wouldn’t have to set up and repack cause she did do the charms on the bag they could have just has one person moving from spot to spot instead of 3 making them harder to find they would also have a lot more space privacy and a proper place to clean and cook also having extra supplies it seems like a smarter ides to me

Uh . . . Harry was ashamed to not think of it?
He did think of getting Frank too. He paid for doppelgangers of both Longbottoms. You just forgot that by the next paragraph I suppose.

Your little head cannon about guns and grenades is countered by the fact that physical damage is done to combatants in the book. Why do people banish objects? Why are transfigured warriors used? Your claims don’t hold up.

Great story I hope you pick it back up sometime.

I stopped reading at snape saying "I bully children", fanfictions like these ruin the story for me. The idea Snape would consciously "bully" someone, he was a rude person, but never harmed anybody. He hated Harry for a reason, and Neville too because he was other one of the prophecy. However, in the end by coincidentally, Neville avenged his death, killing Nagini

this fic is pretty fun!

I really tried, but I can't continue reading this work. Nothing's original, story line copied from original and the rest is copied from other fics. And nothing happens in your story.

Another copy and paste story

So far so good with this though I would recommend editing on the grammar of the writing though but I do like it so far. Write when you have gotten the chance to do that.

This is an amazing story plz make more

Do you not know the value of galleons? Paying so much minimum 100 galleons is unrealistic.. its GOLD for goodness sake!

Why are so many amazing stories abandoned? Damn. This fic was a really good read. The enhancements made from Tom merging with Harry def made him powerful, but I liked that you still took your time in making sure Harry actually learned the spells and magic he got from Tommy-boy. Making Harry a puff was a nice touch. I've read a few stories with him in that house, and I enjoy his Slytherin cunning helping the house of puffs to shine. Not sure if you will ever come back to this story, but I hope you do. I would love to see how the Harry/Tom fusion will take over the Wizarding world. Great job!

I just found this and really enjoyed it. I wish that you were still writing.

Did anyone take up your challenge?

Please don't abandon this!

the way hermione's charactar is presented here shows immaturity of the authorship - so I guess it's "Don't like, don't read."