I love this can you please continue!

I would love it if you did another chapter it was brilliant!

LOVE IT!

That was sooo well written. Thats how I always saw him, not like he was never good. He always creeped me out. Please update soon. I cant wait to see what happens next.

Good story. UDS

ouch.

please update.

love the storyline and how you portrayed the relationship between these two because i cant imagine them all lovey dovey.

great writing update soon :D

I'm very glad that this didn't end up as a Hermione/Scabior romance, because that (suddenly popular) 'ship bothers me endlessly. Obviously Hermione wouldn't be a willing participant and obviously she wouldn't fall madly in love with him after that; so I think you have both characters here behaving realistically, and the exposition is excellent.

Poor Hermione, though.

Are you trying to keep this more canon (and leaving it as a one-shot) or were you planning to continue? I'd like to see another chapter come out of this.

Kudos,

Cricket

Oh my gosh! Poor Hermione! She's going to be so emotional later on.

julie

looooove it! continues?

i'll love you.

Hi! New reader!

I love your fic. I need read more, please. Updating soon, please. I need read the sequel, please. Youre a great writer.

Kisses of a Death Eater,

Astrid.

I agree with every word that BittersweetWhispers1 said. Very well written and very uncomfortable but in character.

This was really well done. I'm not going to say enjoyable, because it definitely wasn't. More like sitting here chewing my lip and feeling very uncomfortable. But considering the subject matter, I think that's good. It fits perfectly into canon and Hermione's behaviour is completely believable. I think Scabior's behaviour is fitting too - the other Snatchers leaving and never bothering to check on them makes me think this is something that's happened a lot. I'm glad this didn't turn into one of those she-was-raped-but-actually-enjoyed-it stories. Too many people on this site seem to confuse rape with romance. .

Very good! You write very well:) Lots of angst, but you handled it nicely. Poor Hermione:(

You should write more for FF. You've got a talent for it:)

This is amazing! The writing, the plot, and you got the character's personalities down perfectly. Write more stories!