L'ecriture est belle mais le scénario ne tient pas la route , j'ai arrêté au chapitre 14 .
Je pense que si vous la revoyez l'histoire maintenant avec l'aide des commentaires,vous pourriez en faire un chef-d'œuvre.

I see you finished this, I enjoyed it right up until you killed Sana and that's where you lost me. I haven't read a page except this epilogue since then, and won't now. but I wanted to see if you had pulled a Kishimoto on her and brought her back like he did Orochimaru so many times.

Yeah he's back in the place that likes to fuck him up the ass.

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intimidating not imitating sorry small nitpick

very good story, although because you let Sana die ! Greetings, I hope to see more great stories, bye!

Gay

Naruto is so weak and lame

Very good story. I really love it. This is so heartwarming.

Great story.

Don’t even read this story people, the author is trash! She kills off one the most important characters, Naruto is made a pussy, who leaves a Girl with A super OP Orochimaru, to basically be tortured, so he can be with his friends... Like I said Fucking TRASH

It was a waste! A whole damn waste! I regret reading this trash. Hasn’t the man suffered enough? You had to kill off the person he called family for years, and basically raised! Like I said pure trash! Authors like you disgust me! You overpower the villains, that might I add, never did shit that happened, in your story. I’m more than sure you’re emo, or depressed, because she did not at no moment needed to die, so yeah fuck you, and this story

Very good story. I liked it very much. Was a little disappointed Naruto didn't have any pairings but I understood since that wasn't the focus of the story. Anyway very well done. Thank you for all the hard work you put into this.

Interesting story sad ending

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