Ew having her as a cousin.. must be horrible

Welcome to the Harry potter world were your life is constantly in danger! I'm your guide SmexyBananas and you're in for one hell of a ride!

I love your story. Please update soon !

I look forward to reading more.

Wonder if this will be updated

This is awesome! I can't wait for more. :)

I'd change the world so no one can get raped

ooh this looks to be an interesting story, can't wait for more!

love it so I had woken up in a strange place I would have freaked. thank you

Ooooooooh interesting I really like the whole idea for this story, thank you so very much for suggesting it. Like your other fan fictions you know how to draw in a reader very well, I can't wait for more :) :) I really hope that you post another chapter soon :) :)

Thank you for inviting me to your story.
You did a good job conveying the bewilderment of waking up in a new place.
Cliffie chapter leaving the identity of the character a mystery. I hate cliffies. We know that the character is female and can assume she is at Hogwarts (forest in the backyard). I don't remember a personal elf named "Mixi" so the question is are you using a main character or going with a new character?
I look forward to following this story.

It's okay. You have a pretty good grasp of the English language, so that's always good for bonus points. It's lacking a special sense of something going horribly wrong however, that you'd expect in such a story. Plus, you ended on an off spot. The first chapter needs to drag a reader into it, to make them want to keep reading. As it is, it's simply an ok story, which means it I'd better than 85% of the site.

Well first, this wasn't even a chapter. That's actually against the rules of the site, and will then away most people who would read this. I recommend getting rid of it. Then again, it's your story. All I can do is give advice.

Pretty good. I like the house elves' name.

YES! I'm so glad you started this up again. ive always been too cowardly to start a girl falls into story Take a look at my post DH fic if you get a chance, you're very talented and I'd appreciate the critique.