More stupidity copied from Rowling. Pettigrew knows his form and it is stupid to think he would not have shared that information with his master either by choice or when Voldemort ripped the information from his head. Which means it is highly likely that death eaters know his form. This makes Sirius and everyone who doesn’t tell him to leave a negligent moron. Writers who copy this idiocy are also retarded. Snape would also know his form and would definitely not keep quite about it. The amount of stupidity is astounding.

And yet one more Harry Potter story where a moron author has pathetic teachers that are good for nothing. Following in Rowling’s footsteps doesn’t make you a good writer. It just means you are as stupid as she is. Maybe more so since you are not learning from her mistakes and just repeating them.

I need the sequel! loved this one!

I really loved this story, it was perfect. A warning to readers though, its totally a Fleur POV story but i enjoyed it. Sucks that there is no sequel though...

Thank you for your work, i really liked your story

and if i may ask you to let me know when "Champion's return" will be back too, please,
as i'm eager to read the "end of this ship" as well :)

story was nice so far, but the whole thing with roger just kills it off...i mean she didn't even wait to give him the chance to ask or even ask herself no barely after the announcment she chose the first person who ask and that not even personal.

I really enjoyed this story. I think it is interesting how just Fleur’s friendship with Harry and her presence at certain events made such a difference in the plot line. Thank you for writing this.

Well, I enjoyed your story and was looking forward to MORE. Unfortunately,there is no more. Sigh.

I don't know how I never stumbled across this fic before. It's pretty good for Harry/Fleur.

I always notice this, but in most Harry/Fleur stories where she is interested in him for his immunity to the allure, most of them forget the fact he’s meant to be the only one who is and they have her interact perfectly normally with Cedric and Viktor. Also, what the hell is a half-veela? There’s no veela men, so it stands to reason there’s either no such thing as a pure veela or they’re all pure veela regardless of their non-veela father.

I loved the story. Hopefully you put the sequel up soon.

shame you guys didn't get the sequel back up

I like it

And the sequel? when?

Aaaaaaaaaaaaand I'm done.