ohgodohgodohgodOHGODOHGOD ITS WONDERFUL. UGH. OH MY GOD. I CAN'T EVEN. I'M JUST. NO. IT CAN'T BE OVER. I LOVE IT TOO MUCH. OMFG ASDFGHJKL WHEN THEY DIED I WAS LIKE NO WHAT WHY HOW COULD YOU UGH I LOVE YOU STOP IT UGH NO. SO MUCH, TOO MUCH LOVE.

This is just so lovely. I can't even begin to describe how fantastic this is. It has made my love for this pairing grow exponentially. So much love for this. You did an absolutely wonderful job with the characterizations and the way the story flows is jut beautiful.

AND THE END. UGH. WOMAN. ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL ME.

All in all, I absolutely loved it (just in case you didn't catch that earlier on). I can't wait to read more from you!

What a great fic! Your portrayal of Eames-DeLacey family is absolutely captivating! Hannah is a sweet and brilliant girl and she totally is an Arthur and Eames daughter, even if not by birth :) And both of them are such great parents, just like I always thought they would be... :3

I oficially love your Inception fics :]

It was a pleasant surprise to fins this. :) I really liked how you incorporated the others, too. :)

Oh my heart. I LOVE this verse so much! Arthur and Eames have this lovely relationship that really shines through, and I honestly shed a tear at the ending.

Love this so much. 3

I... it's beautiful. I'm happy and sad in the most wonderful way. Well done. Every scene is so perfectly structured, so that you can really feel the emotions of the characters, like living a lifetime in a few minutes. Very well done. Thank you.

Awwwwwwwwwwwww! I just love this Inception-verse that you've created. It's really quite lovely. Never, ever stop writing. You truly have a gift for it.

Peace, Love, Mark, and Iggy.

Kierstin.

This was amazing. I'm trying not to cry, but thank you so much for sharing! Xx

Oh, I was fine until I got to the bit about Eames and Arthur dying. Then, I teared up.

This is a wonderful outside pov.

I'm sobbing.

Sobbing.

I bow down to your amazing writing skills. I was literally brought to tears when you described Eames saying he wasn't supposed to outlive Arthur 3

Keep on Starshine :D

Wow. I was extremely dubious about the concept of kidfic for these two, but I have to say that I think this made it work. Hannah was charming, as was the family dynamic, and I loved the way it all unfolded, all the ways their past as dream-sharers shone into their everyday lives. It's an excellent, touching take on a tricky concept, and beautifully written to boot.

However, for the love of all that is holy, italics have a purpose and it is NOT to indicate that someone is speaking. Quotation marks are your friends. Use them!

My favorite part of this fic was actually reading about their deaths (how morbid is that?).

It was quite bittersweet to read that Arthur passed after being 'tired.' Having read your other fic, it seemed plausible that he would just wear down at the end. And Eames not living longer after him, so sad. :(

Oh my god. The death part... absolutely heartwrenching, seriously. Saito is such a nut, even on his deathbed.

Seriously though, I love this. Love love love this and I want to take all of your Eames/Arthur fics and make them canon and shdjgkffdhgjkaghj

the end made me cry 3

and inception hiatus! noooo!

but i'm looking forward to the zombie fic ;)

that was incredible! i loved it! saito's last words were classic! xD

-j