omg hi i just came across this fiction and i totally fell in love with it i would really love it if you would update it .pleaseeeeee

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Moonlight's Sonata is beautiful~

Matt The Kid

This story has grown on me I must have more of this brilliant story I sat up last night readin it lol I deffo like chapter 11 where Naruto went mad thinkin Gaara was dead ohhh I wonder if Naruto goin to be super protetive when Gaara get Pregant ahhh I am so excited for the next chapter keep it up lol ;3

PLEASE UPDATE SOON LOL ;3 !

Truly the epitome of the dysfunctional family, ne?

OK, except for the duplicated material toward the end of the scene, that was pretty wild. The both of them going back and forth, Naruto being dominant and submissive at the same time. I can't see anyone else being to tpull that off, can you?

'Well, just look at the bright side. When the great God Chtulu rises and starts its campaign to rule the world, well already be mad enough to speak Lovecraftian.'-It's awesome, I didn't think many people knew about them. XD

Anyway, I love this chapter! By far I think this has to be one of my favorites! 'Fat, Satanic nun' XD

Great chapter guys!

love it

This is my first time reviewing. sorry. i like the story. the bakground that you provided was very detailed and really wove a storyboard for you where you imagined them all living this life where they are ust trying to survive and have moments of happiness in between. i like it.

the relationship between gaara and naruto is evolving. I liked how you introduced "kyuubi" into the story. that was very clever. his concern for gaara was explosive and very poweerful in the story. Naruto has spent so much time running after gaara wanting to be with him. Gaara wants him. doesnt want him.. gaara wants to play, doesnt want to play. he is a twisted little soul.

what was strange was so many chapters that were devoted to basicly the subject of gaara's period. that kinda threw me off and had me wondering why you were focusing on it so much. in detail.

At some points it is a hard read with the flow of the dialoug. but all in all I like the story. the line about the chiken baby was hilarious and gaara's idea about what he views as candy was a highlight to. looking forward to your next update.

wow, I'd imagine the original group would ecstatic at Kyuubi showing up. Although I imagine Gaara isn't all that happy with Naruto's new dominating personality...

wow, I can't believe you managed to spend so much time on Kankurou. Sorry, but is one of my least favorite characters. Much rather here more about Naruto or Gaara. Oh well, I know you'll be getting back to them next chapter. How are you possibly going to reconcile them. It probably won't be easy to pry Naruto out of his guilt complex.

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Wow, Gaara outside was kinda freaky! Poor Naruto just left in the dark...