This was good!

Just one grammar thing: "her and Justin" should be "she and Justin". Hope this helps! I'm gonna go check out more of your stuff.

OMG this was sooooooo well-written! I loved to get my heart broken by this piece. Amazing. Definitely one of my favs :)

Wow, this was beautifully written. There's just something so poetic and poignant about the way you so effortlessly captured the complexities and undertones of Justin and Alex's relationship (and of Alex's mixed-up feelings concerning their relationship) using such spare, subtle language. I absolutely loved part number three, the part saying "there's no magic strong enough to fix her," and the last line. What a powerful and beautiful way to end the fic. I definitely agree with KidsInLovex that you're an underrated author. Keep up the amazing work! :))

beautifully written. I love it. some authors are so underrated and you are one of them.

this is soooo beautiful! and depressing. depressingly beautiful. :)

i wish justin and alex weren't related...selena gomez and david henrie just aren't meant to play brother & sister. her flip-flop strap being broken, the "number three" part were all amazing details. i could totally see this all playing out in my head and this review is getting even suckier and i'm starting to ramble so i'm done now. :DDDD *favorites*

A bit confusing, but it was still really good! :D