awwww this story is COOL! Really cant wait to see what happens next :)

I have to say - I was super excited to read this when I read the summary! It's such an interesting idea with a perfect AU. I love the characterization you have going and the long chapter was aaawesome :D

Buuuuut, all the drama with who likes who is...well, it's un-fun drama. I don't want everyone to be pissed just because he likes her and she likes him, but oh no! and all that. D: If people start hating each other it'll be really depressing. Especially since I like most of the characters you created! (Jere is an ass so far so I'm not big on him.)

I hope that doesn't sound like a flame, because I don't mean it to be! I'm definitely loving this story so far, and I really want to see what Ed does with his future. :)

I really love this story, even though it's just the first story. I never read your other version, but something tells me that if was anywhere near this story, it was great. I hope you continue to edit your story. Can't wait to read more!

Wow, I think its a great idea to go back and edit all of the chapters! I haven't seen this story until now, but I'm sure reading the edited version will be much, much more entertaining.

Can't wait to see more posts from you. :)

I had to log out to review because it wouldn't let me review for the same chapter twice or whatever... lame.

But I really, really, really, REALLY love what you've done with this story and I can't wait for more. I hope you update again soon. :)

Aww, im so sorry! He's in a better place now and he is probably even happier and able to express him self easier. Please continue your story and hope you and your family ae ok. Just stay strong andd keep your brother in your heart. That might be what he wants.

aww i'm so so sorry for your loss *hugs* i'm sure it must have hurt you terribly when he passed away but at least he was surrounded by a loving family when he passed

i absolutely adore this story by the way! i hope you'll update soon

I sure hope u keep writing this XD I think it's very original and I'd love to see what happens! Roy and Ed bickering would make my day

Pretty good for a start, even if it is a little slow(isn't that how most stories start out anyway?). Not much to say...your stories are really good and I enjoy reading them x3 and I don't really see anything in need of fixing(then again its eight in the morning and I'm really tired X3). Keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to reading more of this!

~PsyKou

I'm really liking this fic! I don't care that's it's "slow". I'd rather read something well-paced and that doesn't rush through the story. Update soon!

&&Andy

I'm hooked! Edwin runaways is so sexy!

I really like this story. :) I've never read anything similar to it before.

I only found one mistake and it was a little capitalization error so no biggie.

I like how Ed was acting when he was trying to make Winry go with him. :) I thought it was kinda funny and cute.

Gah, sorry, I'm multitasking more and more these days . . . x.x Sorry that I didn't review the first chapter. ."

Well, welcome back, Morgan~! o Or Morgstang . . . Whatever you prefer. . I missed you! ;A;

Well, well, Ed is on an adventure, and Winry just happens to be dragged along as well. . So much like them. XD I wonder . . . How would Van Elric and Al react? And now, what'll happen, now they know "Colonel Bastard"? XD There seems to be some pretty big problems . . . But, I wonder what the main plotline will be . . .? *o*

There were some little mistakes here and there, but nothing so huge that it was confusing. X3 Small typos, that's it. _

Well, I can't wait until we find where this story will turn. X3 But, take your time too~! o No rush, no rush. _ Now that the manga has finally reached its conclusion, what ride will YOU take us? X3

Mustang xDDD so cool xDDD

update soon please :D

Oh Boy...Roy-boy showed up XD

Can't wait for the next chapter!