pleasee make more chapter... i really love this story

i must say i enjoyed each and every part of this, and I thank AstarteLuna for pointing me out to this fic

I like your pacing in this story. Nice work!

It looks good as far as I can remember. You can always use the Wikipedia website to verify facts like names and plot points in the story if you don't want to watch it. But it is a really good anime.

Okay okay okay . . . . *takes a deep breath* THIS CHAPTER WAS AMAZING!

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I just think your writing it so good. And I love all the effort you put in. And i think it is super impressive that it is so long. I've never been able to write anything half as long as this. Not even on my first fic! Before I learned what quality control and story coherence was.

Your story was coherent. And you did a great job with the descriptions, and the character dialogue, and showing not telling. I loved this so much! I like the OC. I like the new plot you put in. I'll happily suspend by disbelief if it means I get to read more of this.

I freaking love it so much. You did a great job showing everyones reactions in the city. To be honest, I haven't even seen wolfs rain but your descriptions were so good. And your story telling was so coherent. Even a loser like me could fall along.

I love! Love! Love this chapter so much. Thank you for all the time and effort you put into it. Thank you! Thank You! Thank You! Thank you!

Also you did such a good job of building up tension at the end. It was riveting. And heart breaking too. Guess I'd better stock up on tissues before I read chapter 5. And, I'll watch episodes of wolfs rain too.

That way I can tell when you do a great job of adapting whats already there, and when you do a fantastic job coming up with new ideas.

Also I love the way you ended this chapter "Who knows what the next day might bring"

Fantastic work!

Alright. So after reading through this fic, I must say that I enjoyed it very well. The written is pretty good and I feel for the main characters. Hopefully, another chapter comes out soon!

Nice story so far. I'm loving your OC. :D

Oh, so this will be one of those stories that tries to stick real close to the original source material. So it'll kind of be the same thing only with the addition of Aura. Neat.

So far this fic is pretty cool. Maybe the nostalgia is a big part of that. You just don't see that many stories like this around anymore. Mainly because a lot of the elements this story uses are no longer in favor.

Also, I've already said this before. And I will say it again. You are an excellent writer.

And it is freaking awesome and brilliant the you acutually used 0_0 in a story. Oh, dang. I almost break a rib from laughing so hard. That if bloody brilliant. I wish that I thought of that. Dang, oh I wish that there was an option to favorite a story twice. That was freaking gold!

I like that you are putting another legend into the story. It takes a bit of suspension of disbelief on the part of any reader to accept a change that big. But, having another Legend means that Aura will have her own part to play in the story and she won't feel like a tag along.

So, what you did was a literary gamble. Some risk for plenty of reward.

Doing stuff like that is rather brave. So, my hat goes of to you Madam. Good job taking risks!

And the idea of searching for guardians that represent the corners of the earth is kind of cool. I mean, its been done before. But its still a cool addition to this story.

I also think that its interesting that you put so much time and effort into physical descriptions. Or, its cool that you did it in this story. A lot of the "good" fic authors out there like to leave some physical stuff to the readers imagination. Because they'd rather put that focus on other narrative elements.

What you did here was . . . different. I like different. Its like you really wanted us to see what you say. To share the awesome visuals you had in your head. Its like you were fascinated, perhaps even obsessed, with the appearance of the characters you created.

That passion is quite rare in classical works. We are rarely treated to a careful break down of Romeo's or Othelo's physical features. Your work, this story, is a welcome departure from that narrative choice.

I know that sort of stuff is a matter of choice. Different people like different things in stories. So, all I can say is this. I like your story. I like the choices you made. I find them refreshing. I am oh so very glad that you wrote this story.

Oh, and I like that the main character actually reacts to stuff. Like when she said "WHAT!" so loud that the elder had to cover up his ears. Its nice to read a story where the main character isn't some bland guy thats obsessed with doing bad ass stuff at the expense of everything else.

Yeah, the emotional complexity in this story is definitely a bonus.

Also this was a really good chapter. Great job, Crystal-Wolf-Guardian-967.

Hmmm . . . so this is a pretty short chapter. But the total word count is around 20,000. So you saved the real meat of the story for the later chapters. Thats probably a good move. Long chapters are awesome. But, trying to get through a super long chapter 1 (unless that chapters is INSANELY GOOD) can be pretty hard.

Putting the Prologue above the actual chapter was probably a smart move. Most people skip chapters labeled "prologue" because they want to dive right into the story. So, having the prologue where most people put authors notes was a clever way of making it accessible to people that skipped the prologue.

And its cool that when you put the prologue up there you spaced it out the same way that you spaced out all the paragraphs in your story. I'm lazy so I probably would have just pasted it without changing anything.

But your approach is better because it, um, it makes reading easier. Since you flow form reading a spaced out prologue into reading the spaced out story.

Oh, and it is so cool that you wrote stuff on a notebook and then transferred it over. I mean, i just work digitally. On google docs and the like. I have so much respect for some one that would put in the work to transfer there work from a notebook to a doc. Must've taken a lot of typing to do all that. Um, good job working so hard!

Sorry, I should start reviewing the actual story.

Your writing is pretty good. Okay its really good. And I like that its written in first person from your OC's point of view. Its a nice change from a lot of the third person omniscient and third person limited stories I usually read.

Also I enjoy stories with a tragic protagonist. So this is my jam. I mean, stories like this are my jam. Stories that have a lot of Feels in them are awesome!

The start of this chapter really feels somber. Great job creating such an powerful atmosphere.

Huh, and Kiba is in this story. Cool.

The set up for this story seems like its on point. Descriptions are good, dialogue is good, and over all its leagues ahead of everything that I've ever written. Good work.

Yep you are definitely a really really good writer.

Great work on this chapter. I really liked it.

Interesting. This is a pretty short Prologue. I often hear that brevity is the soul of wit.

So, I look forward to seeing what happens next.

Also you put all that information into a single paragraph block. Which means that when some one reads it they might have to get through it all in one go. That is an interesting stylistic choice. I kind of like it. It reminds me of the fan fics I read when I was younger.

I also like that this story follows one of your OC's. You don't see that too much in newer fan fics. Probably since folks treat it like its some kind of sin against fan fiction or what ever.

Its really cool that you devoted this story to a friend of yours. Oh and as far as Prologues go, this was a pretty good one.

This story sounds very promising. Can't wait to see how the story goes along with the story line

Hi I was asked to review this story in your behalf so here's my review. after reading all the chapters i think it's in desperate need of some editing and there's way too much exposition however it does get better in the third chapter. Also I noticed that the "romance" between Kiba and the OC Aura happened hella quick like blink and you'll miss it quick. It wasn't developed at all and the OC lacked depth although it was only a few chapters I couldn't really get a grip on what her personality was like. Also while you are telling a story that's already been told there should be an element of originality like a perspective that isn't shown in the show. My last recommendation would be that in the Final Chapter especially it was choppy it kept jumping from one POV to another and it could be taken as hard to keep up that's all I really have to say about it I hope that helps you and I hope you continue the story because I think if it was Rewritten it would have a lot of potential and I love Wolf's Rain so I'd love to read it

I love this story. My crush is Kiba. Continue updating please? I don't wanna wait for it.

I love it but I do suggest separating when people are talking. It gets a little hard to read when it's bunched up in a paragraph,
Otherwise this is good can't wait for more.

I remember this show! I loved it so much because it was so pretty. I'm thrilled with the idea of giving Kiba another wolf to love instead of the Flower Maiden (yeah, I was never on board with that one). It was just such a sad story anyway . . . Aura's presence seems to give it a bit more hope, even if she did have a rather violent beginning.

I know this story is old, but I thought I'd review anyway as thanks for the one you left me. :3