Oh, this is so cute! It feels like they're dreaming and maybe that feeling makes me like it even more. I also really like how there were no cheesy, dramatic proclamations of love or anything like that. They were both playful and teasing and lol compromising virtue.
I love it.

Perfect follow-up to movie ending.

GAH! This was sooooooo hawt!romantic! I seriously want to take a trip on a train like that!

Perfect. Everything about this story is perfect to me. The atmosphere, characters, the general idea... You're an amazing writer and I really hope that someday you'll write some more fanfiction about "Inception".

Gahhhhhhh want more. Apparently I am a greedy fucker.

I love that I can't tell, despite the tether, if they are in a dream or not. Something about Arthur always feels dream-like...

I loved it 3

I loved the part where Ariadne was saying "I promise I won't compromise your virtues."

Best Inception fanfiction I've ever read. Truly.

I loved this! It's very romantic, and a great way for Arthur and Ariadne to finally get together. I love that it's on a train too :) Wonderful job!

Awww I loved the moment when she sat down on her lap and they just sat there together, so cute!

I really like this. Everything I've read of yours is always so funny and well-written I forget I'm reading a fanfiction! Arthur and Ariadne are one of my favourite couples of all time and I really liked the way you represented them here; despite the fact Arthur's suave and polished, he's still human and that seems to make him even more attractive. Yes. I like him. Ariadne's great too and I particularly like the opening scene, the one where she's drawing 'Great Aunt Muriel'. It made me smile.

Good luck with whatever you're planning on writing next! I look forward to reading it - Ellen

delicious. *wiggles eyebrows*

okay, sorry. i use that as an adjective when things get suggestive. XD

but anyway, FAN-tastical. loved the whole thing. the description, the train ride, how reading about these two felt natural, rather than simply written about. Arthur really felt like Arthur, even more so than Ariadne felt like herself. you did a spectacular job, i applaud you. :D

Wah, I love it! Original and very in character and just wonderful!

Honestly, I thought, "He has a handkerchief? Well, of course he does." When I read the last line of the chapter, I giggled to myself and decided to leave you this note. I'm enjoying this story immensely.

this story deserves a freaking award. seriously. you've added to the original chqrarcters without making them ooc, the imagery is fantastic and you have a definite knack for writing witty lines.

this story is officially my canon.