AHHHHHHHHHHH GR8 FIC MAN

Oh Spock has got HIS number. Well done. Left Kirk speechless, and I'll bet that rarely happens. This short piece made me smile, a lot.

Hi JadeMac! This is wonderful! So cleverly written, the characters read perfectly, the wit, innuendo and conversation between the characters of Jim and Spock is very entertaining and brought a grin to my face, a story that simultaneously is fun, poignant, with doses of hurt, comfort, affection and wonder! I love it :-) I'm not a big fan of K/S that much, as I for the most part prefer canon / gen type stories with the great and powerful friendships between Jim, Bones and Spock, most usually with good doses of hurt/comfort cause I'm mean that way - but I do occasionally read K/S if the story is well written and I have to say I really, really enjoyed reading this - THANK YOU! I am an avid reader who wishes she could write, I even took a semester of writing classes at Uni but got shot down by my lecturer who told me I was too analytical in my story telling, lol. Thankfully though the writing classes were just a minor part of my degree - I enjoyed them immensely all the same! Sorry, rambling on as I tend to do ;-) I just wanted to say that you write as well as I wish I could write and I'll now have to read everything you've written here, as when I find a great author I stick with them. You have great skill and ability JadeMac2442 - Thanks again! Cheers, Kerry.

Excellent story I love it so far and can’t wait to read more of this super story so update soon.

Fantastic story it is really was awesome please update very soon look forward to read more.

Great little one-shot!

I am curious to see how this goes, so please keep up the wonderful work and post more soon.

This is one of my favorites. I've commented before but it's so sweet and I like Spick so much in this I wanted to give you a 'shout out' once more. Kudos.

I like this story; it's entertaining!

AWWWWWWWWW! That was so cute! Like, seriously aww.

Well this is cute! Do you think you'll continue it?

Delightful and tantalizing. Would be nice to see more of this fic.

That was just beautiful!

Oh my god. I LOVE IT! Where is the rest? please please update!

I like this!