That was breathtaking. No other word for it. Definitely one of the best fics I've read in a while, HP or not.

This was so heartbreaking. You wrote it so wonderfully, every bit was integrated so well. The emotions, the characters, the plot. . . It was all fantastic.

Damn, that was depressing. But well-written, fantastically so. Every character was so vivid, and you actually had me feeling Oliver's pain, which is surely a mark of greatness. And I loved the glimmer of hope towards the end; that maybe Percy could come back one day...

Amazing work.

- Legs

A great story filled with an interesting twist, but the time sequences disoriented me for a bit.

for awhile there i didn't get what was going on then i figured it out. Nicely written, aw poor ol. Quite sweet, i do like the back and forth type of writing you used to.