Reviews for Moments |
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LilyRosetheDreamer chapter 8 . 7/3/2011 I love this story. :) |
yellowstar128 chapter 8 . 7/3/2011 Aww, I'm actually a little sad to see you finish this one. I really liked it. :D Great job. |
C. R. Scott chapter 7 . 5/23/2011 I really enjoy these stories of yours. I'm a huge fan of slice-of-life tales. I do have one critique, though, which is that there are quite a few typos in this story that distract from it. Well, not exactly flat-out typos, but instances where you seem to be missing words, or the wrong words are used for ones that are really similar. For example [errors in brackets]: "...Dick glanced sideways at him. Just like he thought there was a small hint of a [small(smile)] on his face." "...Bruce tried to glare him, "You sing, [hmm(hum)] or tap anything that sounds like the theme to Bananas in Pajama I will let Damien have five minutes to do whatever he wants to you." "Do you think that [(I)] want a family?", Damien asked suddenly If you can go back through and correct these, and other small flaws, I think this story is otherwise perfect. |
totallyPSYCHED chapter 5 . 4/7/2011 I love this I've been waiting for a story/chapter like this C: Lol Dick It was very cute :D the whole idea of starting a new teadition is just perfect |
Moma bear Emma Swan chapter 1 . 2/18/2011 WAS the story A mix of Dick And BRuce's Bat? VERY good! |
CMU chapter 4 . 2/18/2011 Well written, you got the characters right. Any chance of Selina popping up? |
totallyPSYCHED chapter 4 . 2/18/2011 I loved the sibling-like interaction between steph and dick :) very cool- Wish Damian had been there- but the idea of him annoying the Titans for the weekend is chuckle worthy xD Also I see the strong "don't piss Babs off" moral of the story C: |
totallyPSYCHED chapter 3 . 1/26/2011 Oh I love this so much! :D I hope there's more :] :D |
totallyPSYCHED chapter 3 . 1/26/2011 Oh I love this so much! :D I hope there's more :] :D |
caitycat22 chapter 3 . 1/21/2011 Love them :) |
Fullmetal Knight chapter 3 . 1/19/2011 Poor Jason. All alone in a cell in Blackgate. While his family is reunited. |
bat-with-butterfly-wings chapter 2 . 12/28/2010 AHHHH! That was amazing! Oh my gosh, that was FANTASTIC. I really love how you write all of the batboys, it seems so realistic, and I can practically imagine all of this happening in the comics. Please PLEASE write more of these things they're awesome! (p.s I am officially your number 1 fan) |
Fullmetal Knight chapter 2 . 12/28/2010 Awww poor Damian. Well if he stops being a jerk then maybe, just maybe, he could get that wish of working well with them. Oh and is Jason going to show up soon? |
bat-with-butterfly-wings chapter 1 . 12/17/2010 That was so awesome! I loved your story. |