It takes quite a bit of wording to give me the jeebiez but even I felt a slight chill reading this so braa-vo. I like how you managed to incorporate some "fluff" anyways, even though I don't think I would consider it romance when it was more of just a past-time for Sasuke. I was actually looking forward to /more/ but, le sigh, I guess it's better that you completed this than not.

I love how you described the shadows, the darkening of a room, the mood of a place, Sasuke's character, Sakura's constant wariness, did-I-mention Sasuke? Yeah I'll just give that a double name-drop. I actually did thought he was an ahemincubusahem but then if he was a real person before then that means that theory is a no-go. I wish you had a multi-chaptered SS story in the works (or even in the future) because I would so jump on that bandwagon right quick if this writing of yours was anything to go by. Thank-you for sharing.

Omg that was cool :D I'm not rlly used to reading stuff like these,... I think... but I liked it, good job! But u should've put something like sasuke and sakura having a fluffy lovey farewell moment in the end.. but it was really good :D

Really sad this ended TT its a great story i really wish it was longer though and maybe had a bit more romance and scares in it
overall great story and i hope you do more like it :D 3

I saw Paranormal Activity about two weeks ago, and this just reminded me of the movie, so the whole time I was just freaking out. I'm sitting alone in the dark by a glass door at two in the morning, and my animals keep making noise. I'm so freaking paranoid, it's not even funny. I felt like I was there, so kudos to you for the good imagery and description.
It didn't really seem like a romance though, if that's what you were going for. I also really loved all the characters in this story. The only character who I thought wasn't acting like himself was Chouji, but we don't know much about him, so I suppose it's fair enough to give him some character.
I'm going to try to fall asleep now.

I'll have to tell you that your story totally freaked me out.

I was reading this at 2 am on my cellphone, in my dark (shadowy, lifeless, darkdark) bedroom, while I was trying to get some sleep, but couldn't

and this story didn't help. Really.

I wanted to finish it quickly, 'cause I was curious about the end (and I loooove scary stories) buttt, you see, I've moved out to this (kind of) apartment last week, (I left my parents house to study on a bigger city) so I'm not used to it yet, anyway

It's really hard to scare the hell out of me nowadays. I'm used to watch horror movies alone or to read Stephen King before sleeping and... as I was saying, my room was so so so creepy, that I had to turn on the lights because I was almost freaking.

Your write is THAT great. Seriously. Even when I tried to think "oh my, it's just Sasuke. Just Sasuke. Stop thinking scary things.", it didn't help at all.

In the end, I fell asleep around 5 am. Yeah. And I had to wake up around 5:45 to study.

But I love your fanfic, that's why I'm leaving a review. I usually don't feedback, that's because I'm brazilian and my english sucks so I don't really like to embarass myself.

Sorry about typos, and sorry about my grammar. I have issues with prepositions and verbs. And my lack of vocabulary.

Anyway, great story. I can see you like SK. His books are awesome. And creepy.

byyye :)

This story was so good! I'm glad the ending was sorta happy :)

This story is really good! I can't wait to read the next chapter X)

I loved how you made the Uchiha's part of a crime ring and how Sasuke killed himself. Best chapter. Great story! I also enjoyed the romance with the twist of horror.

that was good though im sad sasuke moved on it would have been better if sasuke desided to stay with sakura without him being a ghost or whatever he was and have him become alive again.i hope u make this story again just this time in sasukes up to u.u did good.

OMG! This was AWESOME!

You have to write another one! This was amazing!

AW DUDE! THIS IS EVEN MORE AWESOME THAN YOUR OTHER STORY 'LIVING A LIE'!

YOU GOTTA UPDATE SOON CUZ I WANNA SEE SOME MORE SASUSAKU ACTION!

EEEEPPPPPP!

This is great..! You should continue!

Once again, absolutely lovely. I love how you write this. Sasuke doesn't seem like a ghost to me, but more of a demon or something. Please update soon. Thank you.

I was practically hanging off the end of my seat when I finished reading this chapter. Your style of writing is absolutely fantastic, and when it is combined with the emotion and details, it makes it seem like a movie. Very well done.

OKAY NOW DAT WAS SOME FREAKY SHIT!

U SHOULD PUT AS HORROR!

UPDATE SOON