If Bella is dating, this chapter makes her a hypocrite and immature.. Edward has at least matured in their time apart.

Totally loved this story. ️️

I'm replying to this chapter it's not chai tea, but tea only. xD Tea is translated to Chai in hindi.

Can't wait to read more! Xo Pearlyfox

Muy linda historia.
Después de tantas peleas y desacuerdos Edward y bela son felices juntos.
Que bronca me dio la mamá de Edward, solo volvió por La Plata nunca le intereso arreglar los problemas con su hijo. Edward nunca debió darle una segunda oportunidad ! Pero bueno ahora sabe que no puede confiar en ella. Y esta vez edward no está solo y tiene una gran familia que lo apoya y no se sentirá solo de nuevo.

Perfect!

Man. This is soooo good!

Me encanto! Saludos desde Argentina

I just binged this story. I have no words for how wonderful it was. You dealt with the harshness of life so well. I was curious about the last paragraph since it’s raved in quite a few reviews and it was totally worth it. Poignant. Real. Raw. Well done. Thank you

Great story. I definitely love it. Last paragraph is so profound and truly beautiful

Took a few days to read this story and I'm so glad I stumbled on it. Usually, I'm not one for angst... but this story pulled at my heartstrings in all the right ways. I got a little teary eyed reading the last few lines.

Thank you for sharing this story 3

Wow.
The last paragraph is beautifully profound.
Great story.

Great story!

What a story! Didn’t think I would make it through the angst but here we are. Wonderful character development all around. Thanks for a great read.

Hi! I plan to read the rest of this story, and I usually review at the end. But I feel the need to stop here and tell you how much I appreciate the quality of your work. Some authors on this site have conceived amazing premises, but are clumsy writers. Don't get me wrong - I am not being disrespectful. But I find the errors tremendously distracting. I have been a teacher and a copy editor and end up correcting the mistakes rather than focusing on the story.
Anyway, thank you for your excellent use of writing mechanics and syntax, and for your ability to create a very natural flow of thoughts, spoken words and actions. Your work may appear effortless to some readers, but I know how much effort is required to put out such a polished product.