Reviews for Kisses |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This was beautiful. I think you did a wonderful job with this piece and I'm glad you decided to put it up. I enjoyed reading it greatly and for the most part I think you did have Alder and Dash in character. And the fact that you wrote them experiencing thoughts and feelings they never quite had before adds a little more character to them. In the end it was a lovely story and I enjoyed it greatly. |