It irratates me when Dimitri says he ll serve Lissa and that's why hes helping Roza . But then he really didn't know any better at that time and truly felt he was only capable of subservient service.

That was so sad! I cried. When I read it from Rose's pov I was fine but this was devastating. Good job.

God, I love this story! You are an amazing writer and I desperately want you to continue this story...I really want to read what happens next and you have planned for the characters. Please, please, please update... :/

Through Dimitri's POV ...it is actually heartbreaking for both Rose and Dimitri that they feel the same but go on in emotional rollercoaster of missery and broken hearts. And it is felt through your capture of it. I cried for Dimitri as I did for Rose when he rejected her. You are a fabulous writer..please continue to bring Dimitri alive for us.

your writings are wonderful !...but please can u write about the last chapter too...

Good chapter. I like having Dimitri's insight, but Adrian didn't give Dimitri a bracelet. He just used Spirit to make him look like a different person, kind of like when they were helping Rose escape.

Pretty good dpot. Can't believe how young you are. Keep writing. :)

I'm so happy to hear that you will be doing all the Vampire Academy books. I have read many VA fan fiction but yours is by far the best.

Absolutely amazing! Can't stop reading. You have captured Dimitri's personality perfectly. I can't wait to read some more of your stuff!

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAS LP IS LIFE

LINKIN PARRKKKKKKKKKKKK (yes hai im le pmore fan i just logged in lol)

These are absolutely amazing!

Could you make another of this chapter where Dimitri actually does throw Rose over his shoulder?

there is one more chapter left right?

This was super awesome! :)