Reviews for Synchronicity |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Stumbled across this pairing and your wonderful story that I had the pleasure of reading from 1 to 64 in one go. It was so good and wow just super sexy and erotic... Thank you for sharing your work |
![]() ![]() ![]() I read this story in one go. It was amazing ! Thank you for this positive story I needed it. I will take time to see what you wrote since this last chapter. thank you again |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just wanted to let you know that I just read this again. I just love it! :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, great job. Really loved the story. Thanks for writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was super enjoyable! Really nice job! You should mark this as complete. Even if it wasn’t really meant to be the end, it ends well and lots of people may not read it because it’s 64 chapters that may end in a cliffhanger for all they know. :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() If you don’t remember, you told me about Brenda coming out to her parents in this piece, so I just had to read it! I lost my place, but finally found it and am so glad! Yay for her parents being supportive and really not caring, as funny as they were about it :-) I’m sad there’s only another chapter or so of this! It’s been a great piece! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Uuuuuh, this was so good! I love the part where Brenda hesitates, "unsure of the typography" and Sharon misread it. Really sweet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my goodness, was Fritz actually okay with Sharon & Brenda? It's so surprising I kind of can't believe it, lol! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, I'm so glad that Gabriel noticed something and talked to Brenda about it. It's nice to have someone who pays attention. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooooh man! WILL?! I can't wait to see how that plays out! HA! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really great job writing that breakup scene! I almost believed that their jobs/personalities were the whole reason! ;-) A very compelling argument, I must say! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this! I'm loving the whole thing so far, of course. But I really loved the "if she was being honest..." section that just kept going and going, wanting more and more. Perfect! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooooh man, teasing ladies! :-) Really great writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really great start to this! Super intrigued to see where you take them! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a great story. Any thoughts of continuing or a sequel? |