Reviews for the little girl |
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bluelover chapter 1 . 4/9/2015 oh, please update this story ... i'm really interested in this story of yours.. :-) i hope you update soon.. thank u.. *_* |
Kumika95 chapter 1 . 10/18/2011 You made me curious. Please update don't leave it with a cliff hanger. Please update. |
Ezrudine chapter 1 . 12/22/2010 hey everyone this is the author speaking apparently i lost my password to my account yes i am a total idiot please forgive so please go to my back up account the author name is rikamie2 |
Kristine Angelica chapter 1 . 12/22/2010 Attention Reviewers! Nyssa ummm I mean Rikamie has a new account named rikamie2(O_O) and By the way I am the Author's (who forced me to be her. . .)Editor.(BTW She can't think another name) |
Kristine Angelica chapter 1 . 12/22/2010 NYSSA! How many times do I need to tell ya. USE YOUR EXXPERIENCES IN ENGLISH CLASS OR YOUR STORY WON'T BE "EYECATCHING" DID YA KNOW WHAT I MEAN? NYSSA USE SHIFT KEY AND EDIT IT(WHY IS CHAPTER 1 REPEATED?ISN'T CHAPTER 2 DONE? I SAW IT IN GOOGLE DOCS BUT DIN'T READ IT. . .I'LL LET RICK READ IT) |
Pearl of the Orient Seas chapter 2 . 12/22/2010 Can I ask why you repeated the chapter? I was kind of disapionted...I wanted to see the next chapter... ;-; |
starbrigate chapter 2 . 12/22/2010 Star: *blink blink* huh? Brigate: it's chapter 1 again? Is that a wrong update or the second chapter goes really goes like that? Star: well… please update soon~ •~*starbrigate*~• |
starbrigate chapter 1 . 12/22/2010 Star: the story is fine! :) Brigate: can I make a suggestion please, well in writing the names of the characters please use capital letter _ I sorry it that sadded you but just a suggestion Star: ok! Start the review! Brigate: hmm… I think the one who was playing the piano is the girl because of hmm… I don't know but that what I feel :-/ and the girl thought that Allen was his 'Onii chan' Star: question ...-what is the pairing in this story? •~*starbrigate*~• |