Excellent... wow... well done and very believably painful for all 3 of them.

Love. :)

GOOD job. Weiss is my favorite recurring character, and you nailed him. Thanks for this!

This is touching and sad and possibly a little hopeful. Just how I like my angst! I really like the little details - Altlivia realising she holding frank wrongly for example is perfect of just how klter everything is.

Oh, I just love this. It is so achingly sad, for all of them. I even feel bad for AltOlivia (that b*tch). You madee this sweet and touching and so hopeful for them in the future, just not right now. Great job!

Really beautifully done. I wanted you to keep going. The characterizations were terrific. I loved the scene with Weiss. Your take on alt-Olivia's return is especially poignant. I really enjoyed this piece.

Wow... these are a great series of moments that were just built for this show. I hope we see some things like this in the upcoming Firefly and afterwards. Seriously though... kudos on some excellent characterization and building these moments into something genuine and believable.

THANK YOU, for writing something believable and in character. Those people are hurting and it's going to take time and space indeed. I loved each piece, truly.

Great work! :)

*Elialys*

great story!

:D

I really liked this. It's a real 'in-your-face' kind of story. Everything's so obvious, the pain the angst,but there's still these little undertones of something.

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