Reviews for The Price
LoveHopes chapter 1 . 7/20
Thems a lot of feels about humanity right there.
Tamuril2 chapter 1 . 3/4/2017
Oh ouch. That would've changed the whole movie, if they'd gone this route. Is it wrong to say I think it might've made the movies better? Not that I want Jazz dead, but...this added layers upon layers of depth to the story. Will and Optimus were so awesome together; Will in his shame and Optimus in his resignation. Such amazing characters, made all the more so by this story. :D
Autobotgirl2234 chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
Optimus is great.
deactivated2107997 chapter 1 . 2/2/2012
So Jazz WILL come back, one day. (; This is a hopeful ending.
LunaeShark chapter 1 . 12/22/2011
Primus, our government is corrupt. I can't believe they put Prime through that...
icanhascamaro chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
Nice story, adding it to my favorites :) I see a loophole that neither Lennox nor Optimus seems to have considered. The powers that be wanted the fragment of the All Spark. Let them have it, but after it's used on dear Jazz :)
Stars of Artemis chapter 1 . 7/4/2011
So this is from around the time frame of 2007?

haha. I like your political veiws.
luinrina chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
After having read this story dozens of times already, I found I finally owed you a review.

How did Quinn phrase it: Working with the Autobots makes one quite cynic about the human race. And this one-shot beautifully captures the truth in that statement. Were it not for the politicians, Jazz could have been brought back like he should have. But the human's greed for power and Optimus' unwillingness to take away men's freedom make the situation quite impossible to solve. No wonder Will didn't come up with a solution. However, I am glad Optimus had a few demands as well, like staying out of human wars or making sure that Jazz can be retrieved. It shows what a great leader he is, worthy of the title Prime.

So to sum up: I absolutely love this one-shot and could read it over and over again, never getting bored by something so inspiring and sad at the same time. You perfectly captured the tricky situation Optimus found himself in, and awesomely presented his choice. Thank you for sharing this story.
Autobotschic chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
Awesome! And the rest is sadly ruined by that stupid cat Ravage to get the shard and revive Mega-butt
yamiishot chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
Stupid president D: Let them bring back Jazz!
MISCrasyaboutfanfics chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
This is-well, I love it and I don't have the words to describe how good I think it is.
Hippo'sAmoeba chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
I like the Optimus in your story. Anyway, if I were Captain Lennox, I would also ask the Autobots to rule our planet. Sigh...
Jessie07 chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
Great story!
MissMary chapter 1 . 1/1/2011
Interesting point of view. I have to agree with Lennox on the shame
Quathis chapter 1 . 12/23/2010
Interesting idea on how NEST came to be. Merry Christmas. Until next time.
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