So if Nowaki is twelve, then that makes Shinobu six right? If have have done my math correctly, which is always questionable.

Wow, so I would have never imagined this scenario, but it has so much possibility. What a great idea.

I so enjoy reading fics about Nowaki's past and the possibilities of his childhood, though it makes my heart ache for him all the more.

You have painted such a sad, sweet picture of Nowaki here: the sense of isolation that haunts him. I do relish how you wrote Shinobu with all his spark already so immediately obvious.

For some reason the detail about Shinobu grabbing his pants struck me. I have seen young children do just such a thing and including this added a nice realistic touch to that moment.

Funny to consider what might happen in the future if they remembered each other, seeing the relationship their lovers share and all the tension over Miyagi's constant flirting.

Me parece muy linda ti idea u esperare la continuacion con ancias

Omg, this is absolutely adorable! a twelve year old Nowaki being friends with a young Shinobu is so... I dunno, but it's so damn cute! I cannot wait to read more of this 3

Just one question though, how old is Shinobu? I'm too lazy to do the math myself... :(