love it

Wow, this was so beautifully written. So vivid and eloquent. My english teacher would love your use of imagery! :) Good job and keep it up!

~Dot

Brunn McK told me you're an author definitely worth checking out, and I agree. First I'll give my one criticism (you'll get used to this if I review more), and then I'll proceed to sing your praises. I just found the presentation somewhat unwieldy... 'Buffy does this, Buffy does that...' Reads more like stage instructions in a play, sorta like narration. That's a minor point, though.

Now, as for everything else... it was fantastic. Your writing possesses a poetic quality that makes every description seem more vivid than I'm used to reading. Excellent work. The characters also seem to have more depth than most writers care to bother with. You really seem to put a lot of thought into this, and I don't think I saw a single typo or grammatical error... I love it when people demonstrate attention to detail. Great job on this, I look forward to reading more of your fics.

Great story. Love Spike/Dawn interaction. All your stuff is good.

Cute! :D

Gorgeous story. The Buffy introspection is shear artistry in terms of your prose. You made me want to shed a tear at the end - poignant and bittersweet.

Thanks.

Very nice language. Quite poetic. Definitely worth reading.

Nice, ansty and sweet at the same time. Where has all the Spike/Dawn friendshippyness gone anyways and how do we get it to come back.

Again, really great! I loved it. Posted it on my site - let me know if this is a bad thing. ;)

This was really sweet, I'm such a sucker for the Dawn/Spike bonding moments.

Lovely, elegant, with a very satisfying ending.

Maybe a teensy bit schmoopy, but easy to forgive that.

Artfully created character study. Very well-constructed and a *very* enjoyable read.

Thank you,

-Del

Absolutely loved it.

aw, I liked it. I was wondering if anyone would call her on it in future episodes(like dawn and xander..maybe, hopefully..) heh. rawr xx

That was lovely, one of the best fics I've ever read here, completely perfect in it's simplicity. You have a talent... I would love to see this scene, it's so true to the show. Thank you.