Reviews for Baby Mine |
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Makuahine chapter 19 . 2/15 Oh my... I just found this brilliant story, and I know it’s been awhile since you’ve updated, BUT I hope you check your account soon and continue this intriguing story! |
LyraMalfoyGrange chapter 18 . 11/21/2018 You made me cry this chapter was sooo beautifull |
Marla311986 chapter 1 . 11/11/2018 I actually enjoy reading Hermione/Draco, Hermione/Snape, Hermione/Remus, Hermione/Harry, and Hermione/Sirus stories. I also enjoy the fanfic stories where Hermione is paired with all the Weasley boys except for Ron. |
Mistress-Cinder chapter 12 . 9/7/2018 Portait Taurus is an interesting character. I am curious as to how he is going to try to interact with them in the future. |
Mistress-Cinder chapter 10 . 9/7/2018 Really an interesting chapter! I enjoyed the idea of Draco making peace and trying to reconcile the past by talking to the portraits. I also liked the idea of him cementing in the dungeons so they can't be used again... |
laumirot chapter 19 . 3/6/2018 Please update, your story was great |
HP fan chapter 4 . 2/28/2018 You do know Hermione's middle name is Jean right? |
Luna S. Scamander chapter 18 . 2/13/2018 I can't stop crying |
L.K.Philips chapter 2 . 12/8/2017 I'm sorry... Too many grammar mistakes made me lost interest reading the rest... I hope you can find a good editor/beta reader and repost. Good luck! |
Guest chapter 19 . 11/24/2017 very good but to short |
occasional chapter 19 . 3/28/2017 hi miss D Zambini dont even know if you are gonna read this seeing its 2017 now and all but i just hope that you didnt give up on writting. your story was sooooooo amazing i couldnt stop after i started reading it. it captivated me in ways i cant even describe it had all the making of a great novel. you are truly gifted and i sincerely hope that the awful comments some may have wont stop you but push you to write even more wonderful pieces. Thank you for this amazing read. |
CalieBlack1 chapter 5 . 10/22/2016 I think it's really strange that she was found all broken and they just brushed it off. I can't believe Draco would just push that aside and let her live there like this. You have and amazing plot here, but it could be better worked. Maybe develop better how they became a "family" like this. I'm sorry about this review, but I really do think you have an amazing plot in your hands and if you don't have some critics, you'll never improve. It would be nice to discuss plot ideias with someone (you can talk to me if you want) and find a good way to tell your story |
Guest chapter 19 . 5/19/2016 good but to short |
LCB chapter 3 . 2/19/2016 So she doesn't know what happened to her or they just don't talk about it? |
LCB chapter 2 . 2/19/2016 Cute kid |