I loved this story so much!

Very nicely done!

Wowza! I kind of wish all the chapters were this long, they were so good! (Though, they're perfect how they are anyway!)

I think you definitely were able to show a lot without being blatant about it in this chapter, so the extra time you spent on it was worth it! Seriously, I don't know what to say. It's so powerful!

Thanks again for writing. Keep it up!

WOAH. That was intense! And well-written! I enjoyed it very much.

Thanks for writing!

I love reading about the interactions between Soubi and Seimei, which I think you've dealt with quite well in your mini-series. I liked the way you portray Soubi's craving for pain and his conflicting emotions. Good work!

hi. i love your "sensory" drabble series (actually a lot of the drabble series i've read are much shorter-i liked how long this was, too) especially the last one. the contrast between seimei and ritsuka is so clear. hope you write some more for loveless!

I love this! Just found it, read the whole thing, loved it! You use detail so well, I was totally blown away.

I totally feel for Soubi here. I understand fully but this chapter makes me feel all giddy inside especially toward the after I realized hey its a dream. whew. Great story, you hit upon the senses really well this entire story. But i like this one the best.

i like the way you had all 3 of soubi's "masters"idea of touch punishment & pain-except poor ristuka really has no idea of the punishment he causes soubi just by doing no punishment!very well done!

great job!ristuka is so messed up when it comes to food due to his mother & now he also has a new "hunger "to deal with!soubi always has more than one meaning or level with all his actions!

he doesnt like what he sees yet he was the one who technically made soubi into what he sees. my... oaky then. interesting i have to.

I was so hoping you'd write more stories for Loveless- I've really enjoyed reading your other one but I think this one stands out. The writing in the second chapter especially is quite lovely and so in character. I'm very much looking forward to seeing the next chapter, dear, keep up the excellent work! :3

i knew seimei has issues over soubi-he thinks he's dirty-but soubi is beautiful-so there is both sides to him from seimei 'e pov

poor soubi!he wants to belong to seimei sooo much!i hope you end with a happy one-maybe ristuka & touch