Please please, finish this story! I love it
xo

Great story! So sad to see that it’s unfinished, but I really loved it anyway!

One of my favourite things...re-reading a lost but not forgotten story. Maybe one day I will be surprised to find another chapter or 2 ;)

love love this
really wanna see jaspsr be top
this is just so good to see edward finally get to hear the words hes longed for
sorry im typing on a tiny screen

Edward's description during his training ? Soooo hot ! I've read this chapter again and again ;-)

oh these boys!

really really enjoying the wet goodness :) You are super talented

Love & lust in two handsome packages! And Renee was hilarious, Esme perfect.

Wish you had finished this but I love it just the same. Love the descriptions. I don't even know Twilight- never read or watched it- but this fic is wonderful!

that was lovely and sweet, love the restaurant scenes will this ever be finishded Great stpry

Awkward much with mom, and he cleaned up that scene with mom "it's not what you think" Well, no they weren't fucking at that very minute.

I have a feeling I know what happened to Edward, I don't think he fell to pieces because of being beaten up, I think James raped hm.

wow, how beautifully he wrote to describe that indescribable body, so beautiful so very, very beautiful

well if that revelation doesn't give Jasper a good kick in the butt, what a jerk he has been thinking this was all so easy for Edward while all the time he cared this love in his heart that some skank called dirty. Glad Jasper finally got his head out of his ass.

Fucking A it's about dayum time, I was getting ready to go through the scream and smack Jazz in the head to knock some sense into me Yeah really do you really think that little of him?