I really like it, please update soon! I love the way you describe the situations and i loved the kiss.

update again please XD and please make it longer (just kidd)

will u update again, please?

hohoho, I hope atlus will add this scene someday :D

so, in here, the leader is the female protagnist right?

I wish I could watch Phoenix Ranger Featherman R. Hamuko is such a squishy ball of cute and I love her, but seriously. When she was playing elephant I was all like, "GET. OUT."

I think Akihiko/Mitsuru drama is my new ship.

...FIGHT FOR UR MAN MITSURU SRSLY

Heh heh, maybe it's because I haven't play P3P but that part with Minako and the Phoenix Ranger show was so random it's funny. With the introduction of a female MC, I've actually considered the idea of FemMC and Akihiko getting closer and Mitsuru realising that and gradually realising she's not okay with it! Wondering if this story's gonna head in that direction...? P

A few things I noticed: "He eyes fixate..."

"You seem be getting along..."

And unless I'm missing something, Minako's name changes throughout the story...

I look forward to reading more ! D

There were so many things I liked about this, but the last line was my favourite. Especially "but he thinks too hard". I don't know why, but I found this pleasantly endearing, and it fits with my Akihiko head-canon and I DON'T EVEN KNOW I just really like it.

I know that you know that I've never really shipped these two before myself, but both your fics are making me ship it hard at the moment. I'd say that it's more because of the way YOU write them than anything else. C:

Yayyyy, write more soon plzkthx, I'll try to review in a more timely manner in future...

Ahhhh, how I miss Aki/Mitsu stories. P Good to see people are still writing them! I really liked this chapter, especially the dynamic between Aki and Mitsuru, and you got Mitsuru's character spot on. Looking forward to reading more.

My mind has been pretty 'derp' these last few days, and I can't really think properly right now D: So for some goddamn reason, I was laughing at the beginning when Mitsuru is staring at Akihiko. I mean, it's so awkward, and they're both staring at each other, and then it eventually ends up with both of them making out and having hot coffee *wink wink punched* Oh jeez, I'm terrible :c Best part of this chapter?

"Her face is flushed red and he can't help but feel a little proud of what he's done to her with her lipstick smeared and her hair disheveled. She looks like an absolute mess and he wouldn't have it any other way."

I bet Akihiko is saying, 'F YEAH I TOTALLY DID THAT TO HER.' So... yeah. I'm totes interested in how awkward the next chapter will be :3

Yay! I finally got round to reading some fan fiction again!

This is pretty cool so far.

"He finds a left-hook much more interesting than the value of pi, so while he's learning about perfect squares he's secretly making a fist and practicing it's trajectory."

This sentence is completely true. Oh, Aki and his boxing...

Looking forward to reading more anyway. Keep up the good work!

This looks promising. I particularly like the opening monologue (I'm assuming it's supposed to be in Aki's point of view?) and it's been a while since we had some good AkiMitsu fics. With P3P out, there's been an influx of AkiFemMC out here! I'm looking forward to more of this story. Good work so far. D

((He finds a left-hook much more interesting than the value of pi, so while he's learning about perfect squares he's secretly making a fist and practicing it's trajectory. He loves the way it looks and more importantly, the way it feels. It's not that he's angry or disturbed, but instead rather bored.))

THIS.

((then slowly gives her the most perfect, fake smile he's ever given))

AND THIS.

And also the entire preface are absolutely beautiful. Looking forward to it!