Reviews for Partners
NCISLAlover24 chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
I like it! The 2nd person POV was different but i liked it! Really like this little fic! :-) MSB
Fictionista 48 chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
This was really cool. I haven't seen one done like this before, and it was refreshing. And just short enough to read with this God awful headache I have. Nice job.
PT21 chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
So, did she use the new hand signal? LOLOL! Great piece :)
sliz225 chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
So cute! This would be an amazing scene in a real episode. I love the banter, especially "favorite hand signals" part. These two are great together.
Penelope the Perky Penguin chapter 1 . 3/3/2011
Interesting... Don't really like the 2nd person POV- makes it odd. But the story itself is good. I like it :)
Jessica237 chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
Yay, well-written 2nd person fic! Enjoyable little piece; love the little mishaps that are bound to happen while Deeks & Kensi are working on developing that silent communication & understanding between them, definitely realistic. And I love seeing them work together like this - gotta wonder just how much of it is for show, and how much of it is Deeks taking advantage of the opportunity to be a little flirty/handsy with her, heh. Nice job! :)
Sprite chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
That was great. Very in character. I love Kensi/Deeks. Partnerships are perfect without learning and you captured that well. Hope to see more stuff from you.
ds9jullian chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
Great beginning. I hope you write me. This could be very fun to see what happens with the two of them.
SpringBloom chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
I love it~ This is really well written and I love how it's in second person point-of-view. Keep up the good work :)

XO - Spring
talewind chapter 1 . 1/1/2011
Oooh, I like the second-person perspective! That's not something you see very often outside of playing D&D. XD There wasn't a lot to get off of Kensi and Deeks' portrayals, and that can annoy some people. However, it is possible to make vagueness work, and you were pretty good with that. :3