Reviews for Partners |
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NCISLAlover24 chapter 1 . 4/17/2013 I like it! The 2nd person POV was different but i liked it! Really like this little fic! :-) MSB |
Fictionista 48 chapter 1 . 8/10/2011 This was really cool. I haven't seen one done like this before, and it was refreshing. And just short enough to read with this God awful headache I have. Nice job. |
PT21 chapter 1 . 7/31/2011 So, did she use the new hand signal? LOLOL! Great piece :) |
sliz225 chapter 1 . 3/26/2011 So cute! This would be an amazing scene in a real episode. I love the banter, especially "favorite hand signals" part. These two are great together. |
Penelope the Perky Penguin chapter 1 . 3/3/2011 Interesting... Don't really like the 2nd person POV- makes it odd. But the story itself is good. I like it :) |
Jessica237 chapter 1 . 1/2/2011 Yay, well-written 2nd person fic! Enjoyable little piece; love the little mishaps that are bound to happen while Deeks & Kensi are working on developing that silent communication & understanding between them, definitely realistic. And I love seeing them work together like this - gotta wonder just how much of it is for show, and how much of it is Deeks taking advantage of the opportunity to be a little flirty/handsy with her, heh. Nice job! :) |
Sprite chapter 1 . 1/2/2011 That was great. Very in character. I love Kensi/Deeks. Partnerships are perfect without learning and you captured that well. Hope to see more stuff from you. |
ds9jullian chapter 1 . 1/2/2011 Great beginning. I hope you write me. This could be very fun to see what happens with the two of them. |
SpringBloom chapter 1 . 1/2/2011 I love it~ This is really well written and I love how it's in second person point-of-view. Keep up the good work :) XO - Spring |
talewind chapter 1 . 1/1/2011 Oooh, I like the second-person perspective! That's not something you see very often outside of playing D&D. XD There wasn't a lot to get off of Kensi and Deeks' portrayals, and that can annoy some people. However, it is possible to make vagueness work, and you were pretty good with that. :3 |