omfg YOU FINALLY UPDATED.

ok ngl this chapter was really good c: I think your writing improved a lot from the last time you updated so I really hope you continue to keep up the really good work. I SWEAR TO GOD, IF YOU DISCONTINUE THIS STORY I WILL CRY. YOU BETTER NOT GIVE UP ON IT. I HONESTLY THOUGHT YOU DID WHEN YOU NEVER UPDATED.

ok i really ship Addie and JP. I think it was hinted before that they liked each other in previous chapters, but wow this chapter just made me ship them even more!the way how they act with each other is precious and kjdfja;k IT'S LIKE THOSE CLICHE ANIME WHERE THE BOY AND GIRL ALWAYS FIGHT BUT THEY ACTUALLY LIKE EACH OTHER AND OMFG those two are my otp next to my oc with Cedric c:

AND AND THAT LAST PART WAS SO AMAZING. I LOVE THAT ADDIE CAN GET SO EXCITED ABOUT DEFEATING A GRUNT AND I LOVE HOW SHE ENJOYS SEEING THE GRUNT SUFFER FROM LEAFEON. I really like Addie here ok i think that was established, hahahaha.

One thing I was confused about though was JP and Etienne's relationship. It was mentioned in the beginning about the two being cousins and then it switches to brothers later on. Can you explain that to me please? :3

SO TO ANSWER YOUR QUESTIONS:
1. I have no idea what you mean

2. YOU SHOULD TOTALLY UPDATE SOON FOR MAKING US WAIT SO LONG FOR THIS CHAPTER, JUST SAYING.

3. YES! I got X c:

anywayy yeah, update soon! I'll just be here, rereading the story until you update bc I have no life and I really like this story.

It's good to this this updated, and I hope that there will be more to come soon!

Keep up the good work!

Answers will be sent via PM.

It is wonderful to see an update! I really didn't see Jace's betrayal coming, but I'm also not that surprised, he was kind of a jerk.
Keep up the good work, and update soon!

SCREAMS INTO THE NIGHT AND NEVER RETURNS BECAUSE YOU UPDATED AND I AM ECSTATIC.
And on another note, it's still as fabulous as ever... /snaps fingers. Jace, Jace, Jace. I swear, if you weren't a fictional character I'd slap the living crap out of you...

Wow Jace really is a jerk and I didn't believe he changed for a second. I liked this chapter for the action it had. It was really cool! I really really like the way you write mostly! You add enough detail to make sure we get the picture but you don't drag it out. I'm so jealous! XD

MarMar, you're so nice to me. n_n I thought Jace was going to be a one time thing, but you even went so far as to make him a manipulative, cocky, egomaniac, EVIL dude. :') That is the nicest thing anyone has ever done for me.

WHEEE, the moment I came out from my shower to see this definitely made my night! I WAS SO FREAKING EXCITED TO READ THIS CHAPTER BECAUSE IT WOULD REVEAL WHY JACE BETRAYED THEM. BUT IT TURNED OUT TO BE A TOTAL LIE. That jerk man...almost had me believe that lie...like seriously. I really felt bad for him. BUT, when Alexis brought up the part how he started to reach for his pokeballs, I was like, "Don't like him no more." THE HELL MAN? You expected them to trust you next time? Nuh-uh, I wouldn't do that.

UGH, THE ENDING! I really thought that Andrew would've been able to reach Lance and everyone when he left! what the hell, man, how did they get him? ! ;O. SNAP, this is getting really good. So you should know what that means, right? IT MEANS YOU HAVE TO UPDATE FAST! And by fast, I mean fast. Haha, just kidding. Take as much time as you need! Just not too long. Like, not a month long. No, a week is good :3

Maikee and Cedric are so cute! They make a great team together.

It's great to see some action from everyone! It's really sad that Taly had to die though. It's funny cause right in the middle of the chapter I was thinking about what Jace was up to. It's isn't a surprise that he's a cheater and one of the bad guys.

I hope you can update soon! :)

Haha! So Jace does have his uses. I'm happy to see that he wasn't a one time thing. And that he's gonna get beaten again ;). Excellent chapter, Mar. There is always room for fluff when it involves "smexy blond locks". Oh, and I had no idea who Marcel the shell with shoes on was, so I looked him up. He's adorable.

You do realize that you basically made my morning right? I was smiling like a freaking idiot when I saw this in my mail! c:

GASP! Why Taly? ! I do understand what you mean though when you said she's been out fighting for a long time already. But why Cedric have to be in denial? D:

WOAH WOAH, I see some couple action here! Me gusta ;D

Anyywayyyy, WHAT? ! You're out of internet for a week? ! That means we'll have to wait looooonnngger for the next chapter. Por que? !

Oh, did I mention I liked the ending? WHO KNEW JACE WOULD BE IN CAHOOTS? AND Lances' voicemail too! That was so original and hilarious. I loved it.

LOL, anywayy, update soon! You know, after you get your internet back. Cause your story is what get me through the day and I kinda want to see what Jace is going to do. c:

Oh, Poor Taly! If she is indeed gone, however, she died nobly and for a good cause!

I was wondering, though, I remember that Giles was flying around the tower on his Altaria as well, or did he go somewhere else for some reason?

Keep up the good work, and update soon!

/I'm pretty sure I've already reviewed this chapter but no matter.

Weee~ so I was rereading STARS, and right there! Up top! Are you going to ever post the other drawings (of Bianca, Addie, Bree, and Gillian)? Okay, I've gotta continue reading now... looking forward to the next [new] chapter~

1. Remember when I mentioned that your OCs might be getting a baby pokemon/egg soon? Well the idea is now 100% likely to be in the story soon! SOOOO, if you haven't filled out a third Pokemon sheet-Chapter 1-, go do so! Please don't change your Pokemon answer! (But I'm nice, so I'll allow it anyway ;D)

2. What's your OC's favorite school subject?

1. Hmm... I don't remember filling that out... but I think I did... PM me if I didn't...? :D

2. Addie really enjoys science, yanno? It surprises everyone. Then she has a fondness of French.

OMG. You made my day just by updating. Was feeling down in the dumps and BAM, this shows up and changes my mood instantly to happy.

LOL Jillian, oh my girl. XDDD This made me laugh so hard. Anyways, great job and onto questions woo~~~~

1. Remember when I mentioned that your OCs might be getting a baby pokemon/egg soon? Well the idea is now 100% likely to be in the story soon! SOOOO, if you haven't filled out a third Pokemon sheet-Chapter 1-, go do so! Please don't change your Pokemon answer! (But I'm nice, so I'll allow it anyway ;D)

Hmm, I said either swinub or wooper...I'm gonna pick swinub~

Kind of pokemon: Swinub

Nickname: Bun

Gender: male

Personality: A lazy pokemon that is rather laidback. He likes to sleep the day away. Has a tendency to fall asleep randomly. Likes to cuddle Jillian. Chi doesn't seem to like him much even though he tries to befriend her. Very competitive when challenged.

Attacks: Take Down, Icy Wind, Mud Slap, Endure

How did your OC get him/her?: She got him as an egg

2. What's your OC's favorite school subject?

Hmm...Jillian...Whatever class has the cutest guys ;DDD.

Honestly, her favorite has to be her classes relating to breeding and History.

*starts bawling tears of happiness* FINALLY!

...okay i left ff cause my grades were slippin... and my WONDERFULL MOM destroyed my account...

forgive me?

no? ...WELL THEN!

Q. 1 ...i already answered this it was... misdreavus i think?

Q. 2 well hinas secretly in honors math and a lot of other math classes cause shes secretly a math geek... shed be really embarresed if someone found out... she likes japanese too cause she knows it..(she loves correcting the teacher XD)