Reviews for Winter Nights |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This was a fun story. I'd enjoy follow ups to this |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is such a romantic comedy. my favorite part is when Lee walked in on them...LMAO...and when guy shouted her name again. that was funny, too 'cause she was like 'don't shout' Great Job |
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![]() ![]() ![]() You did a great job of giving their relationship a believable background. |
![]() ![]() WRITE ANOTHER! |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol, love the little humor you added at the end :D ~Dreaming101 |
![]() ![]() Lol "We may want to repeat our performace.." LOLOL! PERFOMANCE? Good one )! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Considering I'm not the biggest fan of shinoten pairings, this is one of the better works. I also commend you on having a reasonable grasp on Shino's probable background, family life, and status. The only thing I would change is that my Shino-kun does not end all of his sentences in "why?" and then answer his own question like some cheesy moron. You also may want to reafirm your grip on punctuation and grammar. I did like that some of his more romantic lines were also realistic though. Last thing, a dignified and traditional man, like my Shino-kun, would have waited until after the wedding to bed his wife. He is, after all, a gentleman. This gets a 5 out of 10 on my scale. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ahhh. A for random crack couplings that are filled with fun. Thank you for making this two parts sensual mixed with one part humor. It was great to read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I Loved It And I Like How You Made Them Go Looking For Them lolz |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hot and sweet at the same time. Cant wait to read your next story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn them finding out! Evil old granny. Nice oneshot. :P |